I like this one the best. I like the font and the outline. I'd like to see the smart energy more pronounced (bigger font, maybe a different font too). To take this to the next level I would need vibrant "smart energy" and something to tie it all together. I like the chocolate leafs as a separator. I just need 1 more thing to catch the eye. And that 1 thing could be what brings it all 2gether.
I like the color and the outline of the letters. I think we're in the right direction with the layout. I would say this font is a little "ol' English" for me. I like the layout/concepts of #209, but could you play around with the font a bit?
Really fun and vibrant logo. Looks well made. My only issue is that the colors and overall feel don't remind me of my themes: artisan, delicious, natural, energy chocolate. You certainly have the energy factor down, but I think lacking on the others.
So, I'm not sure I like the layout here. I like the green outline of the "zippy" and the colors there. That's a keeper. I'm not a fan of the radioactive colored chocolate or how the Bites is kinda clustered into it. Looks a bit messy.
Thanks for the submission. I think this design is just a bit too simple to be a contender at this point. I'd be looking for something that really embraces the essence of what I'm doing here: a delicious, artisan chocolate that packs the energy punch of a 5 Hour Energy. Sophisticated, chocolaty, natural.
Thanks for the submission. I think this design is just a bit too simple to be a contender at this point. I'd be looking for something that really embraces the essence of what I'm doing here: a delicious, artisan chocolate that packs the energy punch of a 5 Hour Energy. Sophisticated, chocolaty, natural.
I like the colors here and it has a nice fun factor. I'm wondering what you could do to tone done the fun factor just a bit and replace it with some elegance or sophistication. Maybe a different font? Maybe some shadowing? Just some thoughts.
I'm also starting to think that italicized "smart energy" is looking a bit out of place with the BOLD that's going on everywhere else. Can you mess around with some different fonts here? Appreciate all the effort you've put in so far. I wouldn't be asking all of this if I didn't think you were a top contender.
Looking better. The "zippy" and "bites" still aren't level. The "zippy" is a notch higher than the "bites." I like the green outline you used in #174, but it looks a bit sloppy at closer inspection. Also, if the bite came out of the bottom of the chocolate, you could center the chocolate up top, which I think would look better. That green dot between the "zippy" and "bites" looks out of place as well.
Thanks for your submission.
Creative use of a "zipper" feel. I think the design is a bit too simple and I don't like the feelings that the color blue brings out for this application. Any tweaks here wouldn't be helpful.
Thanks for the submission. I like the layout, but the colors are very dull and I'm not a fan of the big explosion as the background. The 'Z' looks too much like an 'L' and I think the "bites" looks out of place above "zippy."
Thanks for your submission. I like the clean look of this, however, I think the font is a bit dull and I'm not a fan blue for this purpose. If you could give those words some pop and incorporate my tagline, I think we'd be moving in the right direction.
I like your change of direction here. Can you throw out a couple of different colors for the words? Something with a little more POWER (pop) behind it. Nothing over the top vibrant, but more vibrant than what you have now. I also don't like the blue (maybe try an orange? Maybe some character shadowing?
Thanks for your submission. Overall, I'm not in love with the direction you took here. I'm not a fan of the Z-box or the explosion and I'd prefer some earth tones over a bright green.
I like where you went here, but I think it's a bit overboard. I'd be looking for something that's a little more tied into the design and a lot more subtle.
Thanks for your submission. I think you took a really clever angle here, which helped separate you from the pack. Not sure I like the random/loose dots. Also, if you have the time, I'd like to see you play around with some colors for the words. The splash is pretty sweet.
Thanks for your submission. I like the direction you went with the "Z" tying the design together. I'd like to see a more interesting font that hints at a more sophisticated/artisan product. Also, I'm not a fan of the leaf or bite.
Draft #121 and #123
I appreciate all of your effort here. These are the two that I like the most out of the crop. Maybe try combining the font of 121 with the swirl and tagline placement in 123.
Draft #115
I like the colors here and the layout, however, I’m not a fan of the initials. If you could keep the words/font/color and come up with a creative abstract or symbol that reflects the theme of my company and ties everything together I think we’d be moving in the right direction.
Draft #112
I really like this as an image, but not as a logo. Again, I like the colors you are using, but I’m looking for a more creative way to tie everything together. I think you were trying to go for cacao seeds there, but I don’t think the general consumer would know what that is.
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Porteur du Projet
I like this one the best. I like the font and the outline. I'd like to see the smart energy more pronounced (bigger font, maybe a different font too). To take this to the next level I would need vibrant "smart energy" and something to tie it all together. I like the chocolate leafs as a separator. I just need 1 more thing to catch the eye. And that 1 thing could be what brings it all 2gether.
Porteur du Projet
I like the color and the outline of the letters. I think we're in the right direction with the layout. I would say this font is a little "ol' English" for me. I like the layout/concepts of #209, but could you play around with the font a bit?
Porteur du Projet
Same thing. I like this less than #189, but I think we're too much on the fun side. Looking for sophistication with a hint of fun.
Porteur du Projet
Really fun and vibrant logo. Looks well made. My only issue is that the colors and overall feel don't remind me of my themes: artisan, delicious, natural, energy chocolate. You certainly have the energy factor down, but I think lacking on the others.
Porteur du Projet
So, I'm not sure I like the layout here. I like the green outline of the "zippy" and the colors there. That's a keeper. I'm not a fan of the radioactive colored chocolate or how the Bites is kinda clustered into it. Looks a bit messy.
Porteur du Projet
Thanks for the submission. I think this design is just a bit too simple to be a contender at this point. I'd be looking for something that really embraces the essence of what I'm doing here: a delicious, artisan chocolate that packs the energy punch of a 5 Hour Energy. Sophisticated, chocolaty, natural.
Porteur du Projet
Thanks for the submission. I think this design is just a bit too simple to be a contender at this point. I'd be looking for something that really embraces the essence of what I'm doing here: a delicious, artisan chocolate that packs the energy punch of a 5 Hour Energy. Sophisticated, chocolaty, natural.
Porteur du Projet
I like the colors here and it has a nice fun factor. I'm wondering what you could do to tone done the fun factor just a bit and replace it with some elegance or sophistication. Maybe a different font? Maybe some shadowing? Just some thoughts.
Porteur du Projet
I'm also starting to think that italicized "smart energy" is looking a bit out of place with the BOLD that's going on everywhere else. Can you mess around with some different fonts here? Appreciate all the effort you've put in so far. I wouldn't be asking all of this if I didn't think you were a top contender.
Porteur du Projet
Porteur du Projet
Looking better. The "zippy" and "bites" still aren't level. The "zippy" is a notch higher than the "bites." I like the green outline you used in #174, but it looks a bit sloppy at closer inspection. Also, if the bite came out of the bottom of the chocolate, you could center the chocolate up top, which I think would look better. That green dot between the "zippy" and "bites" looks out of place as well.
Porteur du Projet
Did you see my previous comments? It looks like you just took the concept from one of the other recent designs in your portfolio and applied it here.
Porteur du Projet
Thanks for your submission.
Creative use of a "zipper" feel. I think the design is a bit too simple and I don't like the feelings that the color blue brings out for this application. Any tweaks here wouldn't be helpful.
Porteur du Projet
Thanks for the submission. I like the layout, but the colors are very dull and I'm not a fan of the big explosion as the background. The 'Z' looks too much like an 'L' and I think the "bites" looks out of place above "zippy."
Porteur du Projet
Thanks for your submission. I like the clean look of this, however, I think the font is a bit dull and I'm not a fan blue for this purpose. If you could give those words some pop and incorporate my tagline, I think we'd be moving in the right direction.
Porteur du Projet
I'd also like to see a different color than purple for that "branch"
Porteur du Projet
I like your change of direction here. Can you throw out a couple of different colors for the words? Something with a little more POWER (pop) behind it. Nothing over the top vibrant, but more vibrant than what you have now. I also don't like the blue (maybe try an orange? Maybe some character shadowing?
Porteur du Projet
Thanks for your submission. Overall, I'm not in love with the direction you took here. I'm not a fan of the Z-box or the explosion and I'd prefer some earth tones over a bright green.
Porteur du Projet
I like where you went here, but I think it's a bit overboard. I'd be looking for something that's a little more tied into the design and a lot more subtle.
Porteur du Projet
Thanks for your submission. I think you took a really clever angle here, which helped separate you from the pack. Not sure I like the random/loose dots. Also, if you have the time, I'd like to see you play around with some colors for the words. The splash is pretty sweet.
Porteur du Projet
Thanks for your submission. I like the direction you went with the "Z" tying the design together. I'd like to see a more interesting font that hints at a more sophisticated/artisan product. Also, I'm not a fan of the leaf or bite.
Porteur du Projet
Porteur du Projet
I appreciate all of your effort here. These are the two that I like the most out of the crop. Maybe try combining the font of 121 with the swirl and tagline placement in 123.
Porteur du Projet
I like the colors here and the layout, however, I’m not a fan of the initials. If you could keep the words/font/color and come up with a creative abstract or symbol that reflects the theme of my company and ties everything together I think we’d be moving in the right direction.
Porteur du Projet
I really like this as an image, but not as a logo. Again, I like the colors you are using, but I’m looking for a more creative way to tie everything together. I think you were trying to go for cacao seeds there, but I don’t think the general consumer would know what that is.