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Logo Design: Zippy Bites

Zippy Bites


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  • 31 mars 2012 15:05 ZippyBites
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    Draft #210

    I like this one the best. I like the font and the outline. I'd like to see the smart energy more pronounced (bigger font, maybe a different font too). To take this to the next level I would need vibrant "smart energy" and something to tie it all together. I like the chocolate leafs as a separator. I just need 1 more thing to catch the eye. And that 1 thing could be what brings it all 2gether.

  • 31 mars 2012 11:16 ZippyBites
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    Draft #209

    I like the color and the outline of the letters. I think we're in the right direction with the layout. I would say this font is a little "ol' English" for me. I like the layout/concepts of #209, but could you play around with the font a bit?

  • 30 mars 2012 16:50 ZippyBites
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    #190

    Same thing. I like this less than #189, but I think we're too much on the fun side. Looking for sophistication with a hint of fun.

  • 30 mars 2012 16:49 ZippyBites
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    #189

    Really fun and vibrant logo. Looks well made. My only issue is that the colors and overall feel don't remind me of my themes: artisan, delicious, natural, energy chocolate. You certainly have the energy factor down, but I think lacking on the others.

  • 30 mars 2012 16:48 ZippyBites
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    #186 #187 #188

    So, I'm not sure I like the layout here. I like the green outline of the "zippy" and the colors there. That's a keeper. I'm not a fan of the radioactive colored chocolate or how the Bites is kinda clustered into it. Looks a bit messy.

  • 30 mars 2012 10:48 ZippyBites
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    Draft #178 and #179

    Thanks for the submission. I think this design is just a bit too simple to be a contender at this point. I'd be looking for something that really embraces the essence of what I'm doing here: a delicious, artisan chocolate that packs the energy punch of a 5 Hour Energy. Sophisticated, chocolaty, natural.

  • 30 mars 2012 10:47 ZippyBites
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    Draft #175

    Thanks for the submission. I think this design is just a bit too simple to be a contender at this point. I'd be looking for something that really embraces the essence of what I'm doing here: a delicious, artisan chocolate that packs the energy punch of a 5 Hour Energy. Sophisticated, chocolaty, natural.

  • 30 mars 2012 10:45 ZippyBites
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    #171

    I like the colors here and it has a nice fun factor. I'm wondering what you could do to tone done the fun factor just a bit and replace it with some elegance or sophistication. Maybe a different font? Maybe some shadowing? Just some thoughts.

  • 30 mars 2012 10:41 ZippyBites
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    Draft #173 and #174

    I'm also starting to think that italicized "smart energy" is looking a bit out of place with the BOLD that's going on everywhere else. Can you mess around with some different fonts here? Appreciate all the effort you've put in so far. I wouldn't be asking all of this if I didn't think you were a top contender.

  • 30 mars 2012 10:39 ZippyBites
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  • 30 mars 2012 10:38 ZippyBites
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    Draft #173 and #174

    Looking better. The "zippy" and "bites" still aren't level. The "zippy" is a notch higher than the "bites." I like the green outline you used in #174, but it looks a bit sloppy at closer inspection. Also, if the bite came out of the bottom of the chocolate, you could center the chocolate up top, which I think would look better. That green dot between the "zippy" and "bites" looks out of place as well.

  • 29 mars 2012 21:17 ZippyBites
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    #167

    Did you see my previous comments? It looks like you just took the concept from one of the other recent designs in your portfolio and applied it here.

  • 29 mars 2012 15:44 ZippyBites
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    Draft #150

    Thanks for your submission.
    Creative use of a "zipper" feel. I think the design is a bit too simple and I don't like the feelings that the color blue brings out for this application. Any tweaks here wouldn't be helpful.

  • 29 mars 2012 15:37 ZippyBites
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    Draft #162

    Thanks for the submission. I like the layout, but the colors are very dull and I'm not a fan of the big explosion as the background. The 'Z' looks too much like an 'L' and I think the "bites" looks out of place above "zippy."

  • 29 mars 2012 15:35 ZippyBites
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    Draft #161

    Thanks for your submission. I like the clean look of this, however, I think the font is a bit dull and I'm not a fan blue for this purpose. If you could give those words some pop and incorporate my tagline, I think we'd be moving in the right direction.

  • 29 mars 2012 15:07 ZippyBites
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    Draft #159

    I'd also like to see a different color than purple for that "branch"

  • 29 mars 2012 15:07 ZippyBites
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    Draft #159

    I like your change of direction here. Can you throw out a couple of different colors for the words? Something with a little more POWER (pop) behind it. Nothing over the top vibrant, but more vibrant than what you have now. I also don't like the blue (maybe try an orange? Maybe some character shadowing?

  • 29 mars 2012 09:43 ZippyBites
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    Draft #151 and #151

    Thanks for your submission. Overall, I'm not in love with the direction you took here. I'm not a fan of the Z-box or the explosion and I'd prefer some earth tones over a bright green.

  • 29 mars 2012 09:42 ZippyBites
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    Draft #149 and #153

    I like where you went here, but I think it's a bit overboard. I'd be looking for something that's a little more tied into the design and a lot more subtle.

  • 29 mars 2012 09:38 ZippyBites
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    Draft #148

    Thanks for your submission. I think you took a really clever angle here, which helped separate you from the pack. Not sure I like the random/loose dots. Also, if you have the time, I'd like to see you play around with some colors for the words. The splash is pretty sweet.

  • 29 mars 2012 09:36 ZippyBites
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    Draft #147

    Thanks for your submission. I like the direction you went with the "Z" tying the design together. I'd like to see a more interesting font that hints at a more sophisticated/artisan product. Also, I'm not a fan of the leaf or bite.

  • 29 mars 2012 00:12 ZippyBites
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    Melody. I applaud your enthusiasm, but could you submit your top 2-3 designs (not 15-20 at a time?). Once I comment you can work off that. Thanks.

  • 28 mars 2012 23:09 ZippyBites
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    Draft #121 and #123
    I appreciate all of your effort here. These are the two that I like the most out of the crop. Maybe try combining the font of 121 with the swirl and tagline placement in 123.

  • 28 mars 2012 23:09 ZippyBites
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    Draft #115
    I like the colors here and the layout, however, I’m not a fan of the initials. If you could keep the words/font/color and come up with a creative abstract or symbol that reflects the theme of my company and ties everything together I think we’d be moving in the right direction.

  • 28 mars 2012 23:09 ZippyBites
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    Draft #112
    I really like this as an image, but not as a logo. Again, I like the colors you are using, but I’m looking for a more creative way to tie everything together. I think you were trying to go for cacao seeds there, but I don’t think the general consumer would know what that is.