Design #52 by yusha99 is derivative of #9 by subhadiproy, therefore has been taken down.
6 décembre 2010 19:17 MarkAndersen Porteur du Projet
Hi GraphicMJ,
I tried sending you a message, but the site keeps giving me an error message. I didn't want to eliminate your logo, but this seems to be the only want to reach you. So, your concept is one of 4 or 5 that we feel has potential. If you have time, I wanted to ask if you'd update your logo and make it (a) a little less playful (we want the logo to be friendly, but not so much so that it's kid-like), (b) tone down the contrasting colors inside the word "safely" (it makes it a bit difficult to read cleanly).
Thanks,
Mark
6 décembre 2010 17:58 MarkAndersen Porteur du Projet
Hi Sinuwan,
Thanks for your submission (#20). Respectfully, by having the LY in "SafeLY" capitalized it gives it meaning, but we don't know what meaning that is, so it's rather confusing.
Thanks,
Mark
6 décembre 2010 17:56 MarkAndersen Porteur du Projet
Hi Sinuwun,
Thank you very much for your submission. Respectfully, the red/white combination doesn't look very clean as a design and the keyhole looks rather like a tie.
Thank you, though.
Best,
Mark
6 décembre 2010 14:41 MarkAndersen Porteur du Projet
Hi Subhadiproy,
Thank you so much for your entry. I just sent you a message regarding your #9, which has potential. Respectfully, regarding this design (#8), we feel it's stronger to have the "S" in the shield and to have the radio waves outside of the shield instead of inside of it.
I'm looking forward to your feedback regarding the suggested edits I just sent regarding your #9.
Thanks,
Mark
6 décembre 2010 14:14 MarkAndersen Porteur du Projet
Hi JTSCreative,
Thank you very much for your submission #3. I'm removing it from consideration for the same reason I mentioned in my feedback regarding your #4.
If you're interested, please send an updated version of #18. It's one of 4 or 5 we're looking more closely at now.
Thank you very much for your submissions, though.
Mark
6 décembre 2010 14:11 MarkAndersen Porteur du Projet
Hi JTSCreative,
I just sent you an message and that was regarding #18. As for #4, thank you so much for your entry. Respectfully, this logo feels rather heavy-handed and too strong for our brand. Our goal is something friendlier and more accessible, which your #18 is closer to. We're shooting for communicating personal and family security via mobile and online technology, but in a way that's more feminine than masculine.
Thank you very much for your submission, though.
Mark
6 décembre 2010 14:07 MarkAndersen Porteur du Projet
Hi Dany96
Thank you so much for your entry. Respectfully, we're unclear as to what this logo is communicating and it feels like there's too much going, so it doesn't quite fit with our goal of communicating personal and family security via mobile and online technology.
Thank you very much for your submission, though.
Mark
6 décembre 2010 14:05 MarkAndersen Porteur du Projet
Hi Andy1717,
Thank you so much for your entry. Respectfully, this logo reminds us of a skateboard ramp, which doesn't quite fit with our goal of communicating personal and family security via mobile and online technology.
Thank you very much for your submission, though.
Mark
6 décembre 2010 14:03 MarkAndersen Porteur du Projet
Hi Jeblok,
Thank you so much for your entry. I'm not sure if you're in the United States or another country, but, respectfully, in the United States this logo would remind a lot of people of Target's logo. Target is a very large retailer. So, it doesn't quite fit with our goal of communicating personal and family security via mobile and online technology.
Thank you very much for your submission, though.
Mark
6 décembre 2010 13:58 MarkAndersen Porteur du Projet
Hi iClan,
Thank you so much for your entry. Respectfully, this logo reminds me of a shield that would be used in medieval times. Also, the "S"'s look like they might be snakes, which doesn't quite fit with our goal of communicating personal and family security via mobile and online technology.
Thank you very much for your submission, though.
Mark
6 décembre 2010 12:57 MarkAndersen Porteur du Projet
Hi Badgirl,
Thank you so much for your entry. Respectfully, I have the feeling that this logo feels too much like an entertainment logo. We're going for a logo that communicates in a friendly way personal and family safety via mobile and online technology.
Thank you very much for your submission.
Mark
6 décembre 2010 02:58 MarkAndersen Porteur du Projet
Hi BambooNBrains,
Thank you very much for your entry. Respectfully, I feel like this logo is somewhat off target. That's because it looks like to me like the mobile phone is locking, which I perceive as mobile security (i.e., protecting information on my mobile phone). I hope I was clear enough in my creative brief that our products are for personal safety and family safety (i.e., a family locator service carriers sell using our technology). Our services, at least in the past and into the short-term future, don't include a service to product your mobile phone.
Thanks for your submission, though.
Mark
6 décembre 2010 02:37 MarkAndersen Porteur du Projet
Hi Canonicsolutions,
Thank you so much for your entry. Respectfully, I have the feeling that this logo is too busy for our needs because there are at least three competing ideas in the logo: character holding the phone, character holding the world, and the keyhole in the character.
Thanks, though.
Mark
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Porteur du Projet
I tried sending you a message, but the site keeps giving me an error message. I didn't want to eliminate your logo, but this seems to be the only want to reach you. So, your concept is one of 4 or 5 that we feel has potential. If you have time, I wanted to ask if you'd update your logo and make it (a) a little less playful (we want the logo to be friendly, but not so much so that it's kid-like), (b) tone down the contrasting colors inside the word "safely" (it makes it a bit difficult to read cleanly).
Thanks,
Mark
Porteur du Projet
Thanks for your submission (#20). Respectfully, by having the LY in "SafeLY" capitalized it gives it meaning, but we don't know what meaning that is, so it's rather confusing.
Thanks,
Mark
Porteur du Projet
Thank you very much for your submission. Respectfully, the red/white combination doesn't look very clean as a design and the keyhole looks rather like a tie.
Thank you, though.
Best,
Mark
Porteur du Projet
Thank you so much for your entry. I just sent you a message regarding your #9, which has potential. Respectfully, regarding this design (#8), we feel it's stronger to have the "S" in the shield and to have the radio waves outside of the shield instead of inside of it.
I'm looking forward to your feedback regarding the suggested edits I just sent regarding your #9.
Thanks,
Mark
Porteur du Projet
Thank you very much for your submission #3. I'm removing it from consideration for the same reason I mentioned in my feedback regarding your #4.
If you're interested, please send an updated version of #18. It's one of 4 or 5 we're looking more closely at now.
Thank you very much for your submissions, though.
Mark
Porteur du Projet
I just sent you an message and that was regarding #18. As for #4, thank you so much for your entry. Respectfully, this logo feels rather heavy-handed and too strong for our brand. Our goal is something friendlier and more accessible, which your #18 is closer to. We're shooting for communicating personal and family security via mobile and online technology, but in a way that's more feminine than masculine.
Thank you very much for your submission, though.
Mark
Porteur du Projet
Thank you so much for your entry. Respectfully, we're unclear as to what this logo is communicating and it feels like there's too much going, so it doesn't quite fit with our goal of communicating personal and family security via mobile and online technology.
Thank you very much for your submission, though.
Mark
Porteur du Projet
Thank you so much for your entry. Respectfully, this logo reminds us of a skateboard ramp, which doesn't quite fit with our goal of communicating personal and family security via mobile and online technology.
Thank you very much for your submission, though.
Mark
Porteur du Projet
Thank you so much for your entry. I'm not sure if you're in the United States or another country, but, respectfully, in the United States this logo would remind a lot of people of Target's logo. Target is a very large retailer. So, it doesn't quite fit with our goal of communicating personal and family security via mobile and online technology.
Thank you very much for your submission, though.
Mark
Porteur du Projet
Thank you so much for your entry. Respectfully, this logo reminds me of a shield that would be used in medieval times. Also, the "S"'s look like they might be snakes, which doesn't quite fit with our goal of communicating personal and family security via mobile and online technology.
Thank you very much for your submission, though.
Mark
Porteur du Projet
Thank you so much for your entry. Respectfully, I have the feeling that this logo feels too much like an entertainment logo. We're going for a logo that communicates in a friendly way personal and family safety via mobile and online technology.
Thank you very much for your submission.
Mark
Porteur du Projet
Thank you very much for your entry. Respectfully, I feel like this logo is somewhat off target. That's because it looks like to me like the mobile phone is locking, which I perceive as mobile security (i.e., protecting information on my mobile phone). I hope I was clear enough in my creative brief that our products are for personal safety and family safety (i.e., a family locator service carriers sell using our technology). Our services, at least in the past and into the short-term future, don't include a service to product your mobile phone.
Thanks for your submission, though.
Mark
Porteur du Projet
Thank you so much for your entry. Respectfully, I have the feeling that this logo is too busy for our needs because there are at least three competing ideas in the logo: character holding the phone, character holding the world, and the keyhole in the character.
Thanks, though.
Mark