23 septembre 2011 13:37 pressedfresh Porteur du Projet
...and to continue the last comment.#6 / #28 larger words underneath the fruit- centered. again, in the same font and a tubular font. Thanks!
23 septembre 2011 13:29 pressedfresh Porteur du Projet
These are terrific!
Could we see #6 / #28 with the words larger?
We'd like to see:
(1)flank the fruit. "Pressed" on the left and "Fresh" on the right and
(2)also see the words under the fruit.Underneath one another.... maybe "pressed" at little to the left and "fresh" a little to the right?
(3) Both (1) and (2) using the same font and also a tubular font.
Thanks!
22 septembre 2011 10:39 pressedfresh Porteur du Projet
#26 & 27 Thank you for letting me see a totally diferent direction. I feel that it is a bit "noisy" and that there is a bit too much going on. --When I look at the market shelves, the bottled juice competition is pretty loud..I'd like to go the opposite direction.
22 septembre 2011 08:56 pressedfresh Porteur du Projet
These are really taking shape.
I really like clean, minimal--yet clever.
I've checked out each of your portfolios...I've seen your work...I know you can do this! :)
22 septembre 2011 07:31 pressedfresh Porteur du Projet
Great ideas! Thank you so much!!
Here is feedback for the group:
#21,22,23,24 - the straight lines are a balance to the curved lettering and keeps the idea clean.
#19 is a bit too specific to a glass of carrot juice. If one doesn't like carrots...they will be turned off) I prefer the direction of #6 --is super because it gives an impression. The only issue with #6 is that it is fruit specific.
#25 - I like the cenergy..at the same time, the design has to work in one color.
#17 - I like this alot..but there is no citrus in the juices.
22 septembre 2011 07:19 pressedfresh Porteur du Projet
absolutley! sorry..my bad.
21 septembre 2011 21:33 pressedfresh Porteur du Projet
These are great...I'd like to clarify that the juices are both vegetable and fruit. --The green juices (leafy greens) use just enough fruit to sweeten. There is also a red juice (beet based)...It's not just about the fruit.
21 septembre 2011 21:28 pressedfresh Porteur du Projet
I am eliminating #14, 15, & 16 since we've chatted about these designs and the designer is going in another direction.
20 septembre 2011 14:15 pressedfresh Porteur du Projet
20 septembre 2011 10:20 pressedfresh Porteur du Projet
#2 is quite sparklely but I don't feel that an origami bird with effervescence conveys the message of fresh-pressed juices. Thank you very much for taking the time to submit. Please feel free to take a different design direction.
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Thanks for the kind words PH! Best of luck on your new product!
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I would like to thank Artsie9324 for being so creative and demonstrating the design in our market format (the bottle) and for going that extra step!
We also want to note that #51 by kotakdesigner was a front runner. We finally decided to go with an icon and words, instead of just words.
Validesign #63-66 is really fantastic and sophisticated. We love it...yet felt it is perhaps more sophisticated than the product.
We had a difficult time choosing the design as all were really good and many were really great.
Thank you all for your time and creative efforts.
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Could we see #6 / #28 with the words larger?
We'd like to see:
(1)flank the fruit. "Pressed" on the left and "Fresh" on the right and
(2)also see the words under the fruit.Underneath one another.... maybe "pressed" at little to the left and "fresh" a little to the right?
(3) Both (1) and (2) using the same font and also a tubular font.
Thanks!
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I really like clean, minimal--yet clever.
I've checked out each of your portfolios...I've seen your work...I know you can do this! :)
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Here is feedback for the group:
#21,22,23,24 - the straight lines are a balance to the curved lettering and keeps the idea clean.
#19 is a bit too specific to a glass of carrot juice. If one doesn't like carrots...they will be turned off) I prefer the direction of #6 --is super because it gives an impression. The only issue with #6 is that it is fruit specific.
#25 - I like the cenergy..at the same time, the design has to work in one color.
#17 - I like this alot..but there is no citrus in the juices.
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