We prefer the smaller n of #77 (as compared to #78, #79, #89, #92, #93).
We prefer the e of #82 over the one of #79.
It's not clear on #82 that the second bulb is glowing. Maybe it's the colors: the upper half of the first o has an inset bright yellow, which is reminiscent of a glowing effect.
Maybe the second o should be brighter.
#88: improved from #76, but this is still only "eonos in a nice font", and it is now too compact. Also, it looks a bit contrived, it could probably "flow" more naturally.
Same remarks for #90: it would probably benefit from
- being rounder (see uploaded file bumps_in_90 which highlights the most prominent ones)
- including one more idea than just "eonos" in a fancy style.
Dear designers,
can you try your next designs with colors inspired from the file "colors1"?
Also some comments:
#76 Nice font. Needs some tweaking to look handrawn: drop the horizontal line from e to o, join the horizontal from o to n, do something about the weirdly ending horizontal line of the second o.
Then, we would like at least one graphical element, not just eonos in a nice font.
#83 original concept, good. Please do only one submission when you decline the black background/white background/B&W version, as in #76.
It would probably be better if "cleaner" than a brush stroke.
#58 Clever, combination of the letters, but it is more an abstract mark. We would prefer to read "eonos".
#67 too many different colors and style, it's lacking some coherence. Also, we would prefer to avoid graffiti style.
#64 Thanks for showing the black and white version.
#73 Can you play with the colors to
- make the first light bulb appear turned off, and the second one apper turned on
- make the N separated from the rest, and thus more legible ?
Idea 2
Have two light bulbs represent the Os, the second one is on.
Draw an elegant line around them as in idea 1.
Keep the colors of infinity.jpg.
Maybe play with the S as a lightning bolt.
See the two newly uploaded pictures "Material for Idea 2".
I'm happy today, the submissions are getting better. First 3 stars awarded!
#48, thanks for implementing our idea. Unfortunately the infinity symbol is lost.
This is the only design having this: an ascending curve with a small perturbation in the middle making the "n". Good.
#52 best one so far (#28 was also pretty original). We would prefer to use the colors to let the letters stand out (yes, readability is important to us !). Also, we would like the infinity symbol to be easy to see.
The ribbon effect, or the 3D effect in #53 are also nice.
#55 There is definitely an idea there. But we would lilke to focus on our concepts now, see "Idea 1", "Idea 2" etc. in the discussion.
Dear designers,
We are now halfway through the contest, time for some suggestions.
After looking at the submissions and more brainstorming, here are concepts we think can lead to a great logo.
Idea 1
In one sentence: we would like the shape of concept2.png, the colors of infinity.jpg, and the style of eonosnat.jpg. (See the brief for the pictures we've just uploaded).
Basically, it is an elegant hand drawn line.
(Or more precisely, a bezier curve, drawn with the calligraphic pen.)
You can adapt the shape. The idea is to have
- the infinity symbol
- the letters "e" "n" "s"
- a small ripple in the middle making the "n"
We like the colors and light effect of the «infinity» picture.
The two small circles aim to symbolize the Os. If you can make the whole thing more legible, please do!
They should be replaced by something like light_circle_2.jpg
Maybe add rays like
http://www.fotolia.com/id/28984551
but it might make the whole thing overloaded.
#3 we like the idea of a character holding his hands out. Just be careful not to let it be mistaken for a cheerleader ;-)
#13 our graphs look much better than this ;-) Or more seriously, too many companies have a graph in their logo.
#14, #19 playing with the O's is a good idea, we would welcome more suggestions on this.
#15 Clever idea of reusing the same shape 3 times! Still hard to read, though.
#19 Clever. However, one must first see the hidden N to be able to read eonos. (While one can read the Fedex logo instantly. The hidden arrow that you don't notice at first comes as a bonus once you see it).
#15, #20 The only text in the logo should be «eonos», please.
#3 is a first example of "combination between name and graphical element", and is fully vectorial. Good.
#6: not sure about the juxtaposition "E | Eonos", it's a bit hackneyed. But the shape of the "N" is also the beginning of a combination between name and graphical element. Maybe:
- drop the texture
- extend the branchs to form an inifinte symbol (∞)?
#7 to #12: please do not double the number of submission with one idea ;-)
#1, #2: Thanks for this first drafts. Here are our comments:
- Most important (but easy to correct), our name is Eonos, not «Enos»!
- we would prefer the name and graphical elements to be in some way combined. This could even be a logotype with minor graphical elements.
- we would prefer to avoid raster graphics (event if this texture was quite original!)
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Porteur du Projet
We prefer the smaller n of #77 (as compared to #78, #79, #89, #92, #93).
We prefer the e of #82 over the one of #79.
It's not clear on #82 that the second bulb is glowing. Maybe it's the colors: the upper half of the first o has an inset bright yellow, which is reminiscent of a glowing effect.
Maybe the second o should be brighter.
#88: improved from #76, but this is still only "eonos in a nice font", and it is now too compact. Also, it looks a bit contrived, it could probably "flow" more naturally.
Same remarks for #90: it would probably benefit from
- being rounder (see uploaded file bumps_in_90 which highlights the most prominent ones)
- including one more idea than just "eonos" in a fancy style.
Porteur du Projet
can you try your next designs with colors inspired from the file "colors1"?
Also some comments:
#76 Nice font. Needs some tweaking to look handrawn: drop the horizontal line from e to o, join the horizontal from o to n, do something about the weirdly ending horizontal line of the second o.
Then, we would like at least one graphical element, not just eonos in a nice font.
#83 original concept, good. Please do only one submission when you decline the black background/white background/B&W version, as in #76.
It would probably be better if "cleaner" than a brush stroke.
Porteur du Projet
#67 too many different colors and style, it's lacking some coherence. Also, we would prefer to avoid graffiti style.
#64 Thanks for showing the black and white version.
#73 Can you play with the colors to
- make the first light bulb appear turned off, and the second one apper turned on
- make the N separated from the rest, and thus more legible ?
Porteur du Projet
We would welcome more designs based on "Idea 1" and "Idea 2" below (I see no light bulbs so far ;-).
Porteur du Projet
Have two light bulbs represent the Os, the second one is on.
Draw an elegant line around them as in idea 1.
Keep the colors of infinity.jpg.
Maybe play with the S as a lightning bolt.
See the two newly uploaded pictures "Material for Idea 2".
Porteur du Projet
#48, thanks for implementing our idea. Unfortunately the infinity symbol is lost.
This is the only design having this: an ascending curve with a small perturbation in the middle making the "n". Good.
#52 best one so far (#28 was also pretty original). We would prefer to use the colors to let the letters stand out (yes, readability is important to us !). Also, we would like the infinity symbol to be easy to see.
The ribbon effect, or the 3D effect in #53 are also nice.
#55 There is definitely an idea there. But we would lilke to focus on our concepts now, see "Idea 1", "Idea 2" etc. in the discussion.
Porteur du Projet
We are now halfway through the contest, time for some suggestions.
After looking at the submissions and more brainstorming, here are concepts we think can lead to a great logo.
Idea 1
In one sentence: we would like the shape of concept2.png, the colors of infinity.jpg, and the style of eonosnat.jpg. (See the brief for the pictures we've just uploaded).
Basically, it is an elegant hand drawn line.
(Or more precisely, a bezier curve, drawn with the calligraphic pen.)
You can adapt the shape. The idea is to have
- the infinity symbol
- the letters "e" "n" "s"
- a small ripple in the middle making the "n"
We like the colors and light effect of the «infinity» picture.
The two small circles aim to symbolize the Os. If you can make the whole thing more legible, please do!
They should be replaced by something like light_circle_2.jpg
Maybe add rays like
http://www.fotolia.com/id/28984551
but it might make the whole thing overloaded.
Keep up the good work!
Porteur du Projet
Currently we are mostly looking for varying concepts.
After a talk in the team, we like the idea of making the Os different from the rest.
For instance, it can be big eyes looking at the future.
Porteur du Projet
#13 our graphs look much better than this ;-) Or more seriously, too many companies have a graph in their logo.
#14, #19 playing with the O's is a good idea, we would welcome more suggestions on this.
#15 Clever idea of reusing the same shape 3 times! Still hard to read, though.
#19 Clever. However, one must first see the hidden N to be able to read eonos. (While one can read the Fedex logo instantly. The hidden arrow that you don't notice at first comes as a bonus once you see it).
#15, #20 The only text in the logo should be «eonos», please.
Porteur du Projet
#6: not sure about the juxtaposition "E | Eonos", it's a bit hackneyed. But the shape of the "N" is also the beginning of a combination between name and graphical element. Maybe:
- drop the texture
- extend the branchs to form an inifinte symbol (∞)?
#7 to #12: please do not double the number of submission with one idea ;-)
Porteur du Projet
- Most important (but easy to correct), our name is Eonos, not «Enos»!
- we would prefer the name and graphical elements to be in some way combined. This could even be a logotype with minor graphical elements.
- we would prefer to avoid raster graphics (event if this texture was quite original!)