#4D lottagloria
1. Prefer the white background at the top right as in 4A (remove the blue behind the 3 stacked rounded rectangles (learn-shop-knit)
2. prefer the fade behind the Silk City Logo as in 4A –B and C
3. Need to shorted the bulleted text as well as the Silk City Text (see “Changes to Brief” comment)
4. “Free to join” is important, but should not be located near the QR code.
5.Please try the QR code in the bottom left corner with the text:
“Free tutorial” on top of the code and www.knititnow.com/cables below the code
#9 and #7 - good clean look, but could use a bit more punch
- the pinwheel shapes outlining the images is a nice touch, but obscure - took me a while to understand they weren't golf clubs
CHANGES TO BRIEF:
1. Reduce Silk City Fibers text to:
Home of the world's finest yarns for knitwear designers.
Add text to Silk City section: Use coupon code SCF2011 for 15% off any Silk City Fibers yarn
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2. Knit it Now bullet points:
--Web-based e-learning tutorials and classes (NOTE: this is our focus - it can be repeated in the ad)
--Online reference for all levels of knitters
--Any yarn, Any Gauge knitting patterns
--Web's largest selection of coned yarn
#12 and #13 denim background not appropriate
and ball of yarn is not appropriate.
No dashed lines please
Add text above and below QR code - Free tutorial / www.knititnow.com/cables
Silk City logo is too dominant - reduce size or change color.
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Porteur du Projet
1. Prefer the white background at the top right as in 4A (remove the blue behind the 3 stacked rounded rectangles (learn-shop-knit)
2. prefer the fade behind the Silk City Logo as in 4A –B and C
3. Need to shorted the bulleted text as well as the Silk City Text (see “Changes to Brief” comment)
4. “Free to join” is important, but should not be located near the QR code.
5.Please try the QR code in the bottom left corner with the text:
“Free tutorial” on top of the code and www.knititnow.com/cables below the code
Porteur du Projet
- the pinwheel shapes outlining the images is a nice touch, but obscure - took me a while to understand they weren't golf clubs
Porteur du Projet
1. Reduce Silk City Fibers text to:
Home of the world's finest yarns for knitwear designers.
Add text to Silk City section: Use coupon code SCF2011 for 15% off any Silk City Fibers yarn
_____________
2. Knit it Now bullet points:
--Web-based e-learning tutorials and classes (NOTE: this is our focus - it can be repeated in the ad)
--Online reference for all levels of knitters
--Any yarn, Any Gauge knitting patterns
--Web's largest selection of coned yarn
--
Porteur du Projet
and ball of yarn is not appropriate.
No dashed lines please
Add text above and below QR code - Free tutorial / www.knititnow.com/cables
Silk City logo is too dominant - reduce size or change color.
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