atti: I think the nose may need to change. It doesn't seem to size well, although I do like it large, I would like to see own that is more like the teeshirt print. I guess what I meant on 63, is the forehead piece. I would like that changed. The eyebrows are fine. The forehead is more of a ^ versus a V.
ademe, the rays look good. The face looks too much like a lion. I'm looking for more human facial features. The face looks more scared or surprised than angry.
attidesigns... great! I really like what you have so far. A few things I'd like to see just to play around with the design: The nose a little smaller or a different variation, totem stylized eyes, the eyebrows in more of a v, right now they make the face seem confused or embarrased. I like the rays on the out the outside. A little bit more symmetric and cleaned up would be nice, but I'm really happy with them. Good work so far!
Adele. The jagged lines around the edge make the sun look like a hamster. The face also looks more like a sinister smile. Try to make the mouth straight like gritting teeth and slant the eyes on the nose side. The wide ovals make the design cartoony. Can you apply some of the design elements found in #49 please?
Just extended the competition by 3 days... the sun looks more surprised than angry. Anyway to slant the eyes to get more of an angry look? The side facial features in red, eyebrows and cheeks, remind me more south-pacific island carvings than nw american indian totem. Can I see some variations?
finally! ademesolution you've got the idea. Can I see a version with rounded and more clean sun rays? Also, the sun looks more surprised than angry. Anyway to slant the eyes to get more of an angry look? The side facial features in red, eyebrows and cheeks, remind me more south-pacific island carvings than nw american indian totem. Can I see some variations?
I guess I made a mistake posting my design. I want my design modified... please look at my comments. I can investigate fonts on my own. So far mip1980 is the only one is who has been doing what i wanted.
i like this too: http://www.google.com/imgres?imgurl=http://www.canadianindianart.com/site_assets/www.canadianindianart.com/images/dynamic/3478-1.JPG&imgrefurl=http://www.canadianindianart.com/New-Art&usg=__-6pgXpzwna9T2-S1nt22tIDRwWU=&h=864&w=1152&sz=125&hl=en&start=225&zoom=1&tbnid=kPi7vdmR6BMbxM:&tbnh=153&tbnw=244&ei=AueETZaoE46CsQPj_YTmAQ&prev=/images%3Fq%3Dnw%2Bnative%2Bamerican%2Bsun%26um%3D1%26hl%3Den%26client%3Dsafari%26sa%3DN%26rls%3Den%26biw%3D1280%26bih%3D680%26tbs%3Disch:10%2C6652&um=1&itbs=1&iact=hc&vpx=791&vpy=259&dur=983&hovh=194&hovw=259&tx=197&ty=117&oei=mOaETYvJDoOqsAPmtdX1AQ&page=13&ndsp=16&ved=1t:429,r:8,s:225&biw=1280&bih=680
another example of sun rays http://www.google.com/imgres?imgurl=http://theeaglesnestonline.com/content/products/images/SunCarving.jpg&imgrefurl=http://www.theeaglesnestonline.com/content/products/NorthwestCoastNativeAmericanWallCarvings.htm&usg=__HZxWxgSxb0qL5v5rXnMRFz0jn1I=&h=970&w=906&sz=146&hl=en&start=48&zoom=1&tbnid=CcIhbS4k9I_zBM:&tbnh=166&tbnw=168&ei=ouaETf2pA4m4sAPplLn8AQ&prev=/images%3Fq%3Dnw%2Bnative%2Bamerican%2Bsun%26um%3D1%26hl%3Den%26client%3Dsafari%26sa%3DN%26rls%3Den%26biw%3D1280%26bih%3D680%26tbs%3Disch:10%2C1208&um=1&itbs=1&iact=hc&vpx=435&vpy=190&dur=2672&hovh=232&hovw=217&tx=151&ty=142&oei=mOaETYvJDoOqsAPmtdX1AQ&page=3&ndsp=18&ved=1t:429,r:8,s:48&biw=1280&bih=680
note to all: one thing that i like about my original design is the eyes being big and being able to feel the anger in them. I think the eyes and teeth and general outline will probably be the most defining features of this logo. I would like to see more of an emphasis on the eyes. Please let me know if you have any suggestions or questions. Keep up the good work!
@ayitbh - please refer to my comments. I'm looking for a modification of my original design for a more native american feel. I also would like a more classic and straight font like what I posted as an example.
@helloditho - i like the design, but I'm more focused on redesigning the sun logo for a more native american feel. Please take a look at my comments. I would like my logo modified to my requests, not simply reused.
@mip1980 - great! I like the stylize on the patterns. this is the style i'm going for. A few things: I don't like the eyes on the rays. I would like more of the pine-cone seed look on them. Could we try a variation with shorter even length rays? example: http://www.copperreflections.com/Unique-Gift-Ideas/Cowboy-Western-Belt-Buckles. One thing I'd like to keep in mind is the detail when resizing the logo. If I was going to resize to a 32x32 pixel icon for software, would I have distinguishing and clean features? I would like to see some more variations on the facial features. I like what I see in this stockart: http://www.shutterstock.com/pic-70633129/stock-vector-totem-bear-of-american-indian.html
I've never tried this, but I'm also open to making shorter and fatter sun rays as well. I don't know if I did this right, but I uploaded my original design on this website.
@mip1980- i like the style of the face, but it feels like the pattern on the rays in more south-west native american versus nw native american totem art. I would like a more classic font: justinian, arial, etc. I would also like to keep to the red, white and black color scheme. Google "nw american totem art" for more examples. Thx
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