I must say having not used this site before I was very sceptical about the process. The quality of the work you guys have submitted though has been amazing. Thanks all of you.
Draft #35
Is the current favourite. We should be able to make a nice looking desktop Icon for the products from the graphic. Could you do a version on a green background as well as per draft #36? I am thinking this will be useful for the web site and or packaging?
Draft #6
Still think the green colour is not fresh and vibrant enough. Also the water droplet is too big and would like to see if it could be made to work with more of them.
Draft #34
Thank you for responding to my request for trying the barcode idea but it might perhaps work better if the barcode was much smaller. I think making it the same size as the apple doesn’t quite work.
Draft #27
Love the apple. Not sure about the colour of the font. Can you do one in just black to see what it looks like? The official strap lines are:
Wholesale Produce Sales.
Catering Produce Sales.
Fresh Produce Logistics.
Draft #21
Like the apple. Don't like the water droplet. When I suggested water I imagined multiple smaller water droplets. I appreciate though that that's easy in a photo but much more difficult to pull off in a drawing. Maybe the water idea is not viable. Another idea I saw recently was a barcoded apple. This would certainly help form the link between the item of fruit and the software.
Like the colour green it looks fresher that some of the other green colours.
Like the font but not wedded to the colour. Would like to see it in black.
Draft#6
See the comments above with regard to the water droplet and in particular note the comment about a barcode instead. Prefer the green colour of draft #21. As I said previously I like the font but the 'F' seems to, and I appreciate this is subjective, clash with the other characters.
As a general comment I have extended the project for three more days to give the three finalist the opportunity of submitting a winning design.
Farjasum - Design #4
I apologise for being unclear with my comments. The “F” in iFiniti still needs to be upper case. My previous comment made reference to the mixing of a serif font with a san serif font. On the subject of the sphere I was trying to suggest using it to symbolise fresh fruit rather than filling it with an “i”. Try searching Google for “apple green wet” to get an idea of what I had in mind. The green and water droplets together suggest freshness and the sphere symbolises fruit i.e. an apple. I wouldn’t have a clue though how to get the idea to work.
Bob
Designs #2 and #3
I really like the font used by the "initi" part. Not sure about the font used by the upper case 'F' to my eye it seems to clash in style. I am also not sure about the upside down exclamation mark being used as an "i" which I can see your are trying to carry over into the two different spheres. I would love to see what the sphere looked like in a "fresher" colour green with droplets of water on it.
Bob - The Project Owner
Design #1
I like the font. I like the idea of using the dots of the i's but i was wondering if it would work if all four were used or would it look amateurish? Would it work if there were different items of fruit or veg on every i that were also a different colour? Not sure about the clock maybe it should be over the last I. If we use green I think it needs to be a "fresher" green colour.
Bob - The Project Owner.
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Porteur du Projet
Porteur du Projet
Is the current favourite. We should be able to make a nice looking desktop Icon for the products from the graphic. Could you do a version on a green background as well as per draft #36? I am thinking this will be useful for the web site and or packaging?
Draft #6
Still think the green colour is not fresh and vibrant enough. Also the water droplet is too big and would like to see if it could be made to work with more of them.
Draft #34
Thank you for responding to my request for trying the barcode idea but it might perhaps work better if the barcode was much smaller. I think making it the same size as the apple doesn’t quite work.
Drafts #42, #41 and #39
I like as they are.
Generally thank you all for your excellent contributions. I well understand that my likes and dislikes are subjective.
Porteur du Projet
Love the apple. Not sure about the colour of the font. Can you do one in just black to see what it looks like? The official strap lines are:
Wholesale Produce Sales.
Catering Produce Sales.
Fresh Produce Logistics.
Draft #21
Like the apple. Don't like the water droplet. When I suggested water I imagined multiple smaller water droplets. I appreciate though that that's easy in a photo but much more difficult to pull off in a drawing. Maybe the water idea is not viable. Another idea I saw recently was a barcoded apple. This would certainly help form the link between the item of fruit and the software.
Like the colour green it looks fresher that some of the other green colours.
Like the font but not wedded to the colour. Would like to see it in black.
Draft#6
See the comments above with regard to the water droplet and in particular note the comment about a barcode instead. Prefer the green colour of draft #21. As I said previously I like the font but the 'F' seems to, and I appreciate this is subjective, clash with the other characters.
As a general comment I have extended the project for three more days to give the three finalist the opportunity of submitting a winning design.
thank you,
farjasum
Porteur du Projet
I apologise for being unclear with my comments. The “F” in iFiniti still needs to be upper case. My previous comment made reference to the mixing of a serif font with a san serif font. On the subject of the sphere I was trying to suggest using it to symbolise fresh fruit rather than filling it with an “i”. Try searching Google for “apple green wet” to get an idea of what I had in mind. The green and water droplets together suggest freshness and the sphere symbolises fruit i.e. an apple. I wouldn’t have a clue though how to get the idea to work.
Bob
Porteur du Projet
I have never used this site before. I don't know how to give you feedback by private message?
Bob
thanks,
farjasum
Porteur du Projet
I really like the font used by the "initi" part. Not sure about the font used by the upper case 'F' to my eye it seems to clash in style. I am also not sure about the upside down exclamation mark being used as an "i" which I can see your are trying to carry over into the two different spheres. I would love to see what the sphere looked like in a "fresher" colour green with droplets of water on it.
Bob - The Project Owner
Porteur du Projet
I like the font. I like the idea of using the dots of the i's but i was wondering if it would work if all four were used or would it look amateurish? Would it work if there were different items of fruit or veg on every i that were also a different colour? Not sure about the clock maybe it should be over the last I. If we use green I think it needs to be a "fresher" green colour.
Bob - The Project Owner.