41, 43 are front runners. I still want them to stand out more. Maybe slightly darker colors. I like the blue and green and gray, but how would orange and gray look like??
Globe can be a bit larger and on a string. Attach the string to the I and have it lift the I up a little. That may look good. Also the letters can still have more verticality like #3. I am getting very excited about all of them!
dayzdesign: still on the right track!
font can still be thinner with a little more detail, and space or breath throughout. Maybe a font between 39, 35 and 3?
The globe is looking the best so far, but it doesn't necessarily need to be that literal, it can be more abstract if you want. The other circles are too big and chunky. Maybe they don't even need to be there. Experiment with smaller circles or just a string. Try some other colors too.
And the brian adler project can be a bit larger. B, and A should be capitalized.
dayzdesign: Looking good!
The H should definitely be capitalized. And think a little taller and thinner with the font. On the right track though. Can you put another simple clear shape inside of those circles? More reminiscent of a continent or something?
#33,34,35. I love the simplicity! They are just a bit too quirky. Both the font and the circles. I am not crazy about the dot inside each circle.. Looks too much like an olive. But you are on the right track!
The globe:
I like the globe as a dot for the "i", but it needs to be simpler. Almost like the Facebook "Notification" globe. 3 and 18 are the closest. But it should be with 2 colors max, not shading or glow. A string is fine, or nothing is fine. I don't like the music notes.
Fonts:
I like simplicity. Like Google's font, or facebook's or Twitters.
I like the taller fonts in general with good spacings.
#3 is nice, but a little too modern and architectural. #6 is nice too, but too fat. #5 isn't bad, but a little rectangular.
Also I don't like the glow or too many shades within the font. Just one strong color.
For the part that says a Brian Adler project,
I like the clarity of #3. That part should only be one color. I also like the font of #6, if it were in one lighter color that pops more.
Designs are looking good guys! sighlence, i like yours a lot. Can you do a revision with "a" and "project being a little lighter so that they pop a little more? In fact the whole thing could maybe pop a little more. Also I like the music notes above the I, but what if they were a balloon globe dotting the "I" instead?
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Front runner too!
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Globe can be a bit larger and on a string. Attach the string to the I and have it lift the I up a little. That may look good. Also the letters can still have more verticality like #3. I am getting very excited about all of them!
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font can still be thinner with a little more detail, and space or breath throughout. Maybe a font between 39, 35 and 3?
The globe is looking the best so far, but it doesn't necessarily need to be that literal, it can be more abstract if you want. The other circles are too big and chunky. Maybe they don't even need to be there. Experiment with smaller circles or just a string. Try some other colors too.
And the brian adler project can be a bit larger. B, and A should be capitalized.
Thanks!!!
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The H should definitely be capitalized. And think a little taller and thinner with the font. On the right track though. Can you put another simple clear shape inside of those circles? More reminiscent of a continent or something?
Porteur du Projet
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I like the globe as a dot for the "i", but it needs to be simpler. Almost like the Facebook "Notification" globe. 3 and 18 are the closest. But it should be with 2 colors max, not shading or glow. A string is fine, or nothing is fine. I don't like the music notes.
Porteur du Projet
Porteur du Projet
I like simplicity. Like Google's font, or facebook's or Twitters.
I like the taller fonts in general with good spacings.
#3 is nice, but a little too modern and architectural.
#6 is nice too, but too fat.
#5 isn't bad, but a little rectangular.
Also I don't like the glow or too many shades within the font. Just one strong color.
For the part that says a Brian Adler project,
I like the clarity of #3. That part should only be one color. I also like the font of #6, if it were in one lighter color that pops more.
Porteur du Projet
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Can you try in some other fonts and colors?
Maybe the balloon globe can be a little more prominent or next to/behind "Helium"?
Also the continents shouldn't be real continents, but made up abstract continental shapes.