Draft#179--EXCELLENT use of the hand to divide the logo from the information section! Also, using a colour fade to help the logo stand out against its background is a great idea. The halo effect is a little off-putting though. Is it possible to simply change the colour of the logo to make it stand out? No need to capitalis the entire name. I like that it is written in a larger scale to the other words to help it stand out. Could you blunt the corners or the card please? And did you have the matching stationery to show with it?
Draft#178--I actually do like the use of the vertical division line to align the info section. It's quite attractive! I'm not into the combination of greens you have chosen; but I do like the white lettering used.
Drafts #177 & 176--The stationery is lovely! I LIKE the wavy detail. I would like to see the complete logo with the correct lettering included please. I would prefer to see the faded logo detail on the writing paper rather than the business card; and have what's on the back of the card reoriented.
Dratft# 174--The yellow writing looks good against the green on the front of the card! I don't so much like the bight yellow vertical and horizontal bars or the hunter green though. Would you be able to fit the tag line in there somewhere?
Drafts# 170--I think the bubbles, purple flowers and seeds are cute :o) I like the amount of green used in 169 & 170; and the way the logo is partially off the edge. That's hot! Less of the flowers and seeds would be more professional though, I think. The little bit of purple is really pretty. Would you be able to fit the tag line in somewhere? And show your stationery?
Draft#167--I like the look. Nice and clean. I would like to see the logo large and on it's own in the front please. Nice greens used. I don't care for the glowing bubbles. What would the matching stationery look like?
I would like to see artistry and flow rather than straight-laced bars across the card.
Inspirational colour combinations even. Shades of green flowing into others? There's a look and feel I wish to convey. I'm not sure how to describe the way an elegant spa makes you feel when you walk in. I wish for my cards to represent the most elegant spa you have walked into.
I would love to see more stationery ideas! Yellow greens--not teals or hunter greens please. If you need to make the logo white to contrast with the background, by all means, feel free to.
In the process of working on the cards, what might the matching stationery look like?
I like to have colour(and small logo if you want) on the back flap of the envelope with a logo on the front. I like the inclusion of colour in the letterhead and envelope without making heavy, straight bars. The faded logo in large scale is a really nice effect.
Instead of using heavy bars of colour would it be possible to see what it looks like to flow from one shade to another? I am trying to avoid the heavy horizontal bars. The card should give the impression of freshness and elegance and rejuvenation.
I am really drawn to the flowing, elegant designs. I'm not much into "swooshes" and swirls in my business cards. Also, I prefer fresh, yellow-based greens to pastels and "chalky" colours. That's the reason why many which include those looks have lower ratings.
The faded logo as a large background that I see in some designs is very nice. Reversing the logo colour to white and giving the yellow-based greens the background is a nice switch. The logo can be greens, shades of black/slate, white, or any other combination you think might be attractive. What do you all think would complement the green theme? I quite like seeing the symbols in place of words representing "mobile, email and web site."
I especially like the shape, textured elegance, perfectly blunted round corners and yellow-based greens with white contrast in Draft #111. The black is GORGEOUS but it's a bit severe for a spa feel. Can the colour options be played with a bit? What would the matching stationery look like?
Heavy, straight bars don't appeal to me as much either. Only a few designs that have them work for me.
Some of my favourites are:
Drafts: #111 #113 #116 #115--despite the swooshes :o) #100 #96 #89 #77 #75 #13 #9 #7
Please feel free to ask for clarification. I'll check back to see if there are any queries.
Thank you to all who have designed so far! I am on my way to work; but will be back to continue and comment after work. I cannot check these designs while working.
I'm excited about the quantity of beautiful designs.
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Draft#178--I actually do like the use of the vertical division line to align the info section. It's quite attractive! I'm not into the combination of greens you have chosen; but I do like the white lettering used.
Drafts #177 & 176--The stationery is lovely! I LIKE the wavy detail. I would like to see the complete logo with the correct lettering included please. I would prefer to see the faded logo detail on the writing paper rather than the business card; and have what's on the back of the card reoriented.
Dratft# 174--The yellow writing looks good against the green on the front of the card! I don't so much like the bight yellow vertical and horizontal bars or the hunter green though. Would you be able to fit the tag line in there somewhere?
Drafts# 170--I think the bubbles, purple flowers and seeds are cute :o) I like the amount of green used in 169 & 170; and the way the logo is partially off the edge. That's hot! Less of the flowers and seeds would be more professional though, I think. The little bit of purple is really pretty. Would you be able to fit the tag line in somewhere? And show your stationery?
Draft#167--I like the look. Nice and clean. I would like to see the logo large and on it's own in the front please. Nice greens used. I don't care for the glowing bubbles. What would the matching stationery look like?
Thanks,
Mamakilah
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I would like to see artistry and flow rather than straight-laced bars across the card.
Inspirational colour combinations even. Shades of green flowing into others? There's a look and feel I wish to convey. I'm not sure how to describe the way an elegant spa makes you feel when you walk in. I wish for my cards to represent the most elegant spa you have walked into.
Thanks for your entries,
Mamakilah
Porteur du Projet
In the process of working on the cards, what might the matching stationery look like?
I like to have colour(and small logo if you want) on the back flap of the envelope with a logo on the front. I like the inclusion of colour in the letterhead and envelope without making heavy, straight bars. The faded logo in large scale is a really nice effect.
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The faded logo as a large background that I see in some designs is very nice. Reversing the logo colour to white and giving the yellow-based greens the background is a nice switch. The logo can be greens, shades of black/slate, white, or any other combination you think might be attractive. What do you all think would complement the green theme? I quite like seeing the symbols in place of words representing "mobile, email and web site."
I especially like the shape, textured elegance, perfectly blunted round corners and yellow-based greens with white contrast in Draft #111. The black is GORGEOUS but it's a bit severe for a spa feel. Can the colour options be played with a bit? What would the matching stationery look like?
Heavy, straight bars don't appeal to me as much either. Only a few designs that have them work for me.
Some of my favourites are:
Drafts:
#111
#113
#116
#115--despite the swooshes :o)
#100
#96
#89
#77
#75
#13
#9
#7
Please feel free to ask for clarification. I'll check back to see if there are any queries.
Thank you!
Mamakilah
Porteur du Projet
I'm excited about the quantity of beautiful designs.
I'll be back,
Mamakilah