#42: I like that you "cartooned" the horse. I'd like it to look a little more like a pony. As it is now, it strikes me as a cheap trail horse. Enclosing it in a half circle the way you have is interesting.
waqas47: thanks for the revision on the eaves and dropping the LRRS. I like it better. I am not sure about the sign on the door. Can you try something with the text elsewhere? Another idea would be to add a rider who is standing on the ground. Check out Thelwell for the english pony riders.
Hi all! I'm back with some new insight from my husband. He gave me some clear direction that would have been very helpful from the beginning. There are a couple of old horsemen cartoon artists that he has in mind.
First - Thelwell's Riding School. I found a sample on ebay. Also, Sam Savitz and Ronnie Mutch who are a little more elusive.
So, if you could take a look and try something "Thelwell-ish" that would be great. I upped the prize money a little, so I hope that helps!
23-25 are too generic.
22 - I like the idea of the rocking horse. But the design looks too computer generated.
26 - thanks for trying a different color on the pony. It looks a little too much like a deer.
General comments: Think of the primary audience as being horse-moms. I want it to be a little aspirational - not as far as the mercedes-driving mom, but a volvo-driving mom would work.
That said, I'd like to keep the horse a normal horse color, rather than pink. Also, I think we can drop LRRS from the logo and just use the full name.
#10 - like the horse. Can you please try the type in some different styles (Plus no LRRS)& can we try a few edits to the barn? I think the eaves on the roof is a little too big. It is distracting me.
Hatter - thanks for trying another horse and for the non-barn design. I think we can eliminate the non-barn one, because I definitely like the ones with the barn.
The new horse is not quite right either. I like how #3 (and #10) are looking at the viewer. Same feedback on the LRRS - let's take it off and try working with the full title.
Thank you! #1 We definitely want a horse of some kind in the design. Could be a horse or pony. Plus, the font looks "western" riding-ish vs English.
#3 Definitely what I had in my head. I love the wolf! Perfect! For the LRRS side, can you try to make the horse look a little more realistic? And some different types?
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I like them better without the LRRS.
Hatter: I like the black and white combo the best. I think it is overpowering the barn in the newest versions.
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First - Thelwell's Riding School. I found a sample on ebay. Also, Sam Savitz and Ronnie Mutch who are a little more elusive.
So, if you could take a look and try something "Thelwell-ish" that would be great. I upped the prize money a little, so I hope that helps!
23-25 are too generic.
22 - I like the idea of the rocking horse. But the design looks too computer generated.
26 - thanks for trying a different color on the pony. It looks a little too much like a deer.
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General comments: Think of the primary audience as being horse-moms. I want it to be a little aspirational - not as far as the mercedes-driving mom, but a volvo-driving mom would work.
That said, I'd like to keep the horse a normal horse color, rather than pink. Also, I think we can drop LRRS from the logo and just use the full name.
#1 and #9 are too western-riding looking
#10 - like the horse. Can you please try the type in some different styles (Plus no LRRS)& can we try a few edits to the barn? I think the eaves on the roof is a little too big. It is distracting me.
Hatter - thanks for trying another horse and for the non-barn design. I think we can eliminate the non-barn one, because I definitely like the ones with the barn.
The new horse is not quite right either. I like how #3 (and #10) are looking at the viewer. Same feedback on the LRRS - let's take it off and try working with the full title.
Thanks all!
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I will make a new logo for you
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Also, my husband just chimed in:he'd like to see a design with just a horse/pony vs with the barn. Thanks!
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#1 We definitely want a horse of some kind in the design. Could be a horse or pony. Plus, the font looks "western" riding-ish vs English.
#3 Definitely what I had in my head. I love the wolf! Perfect! For the LRRS side, can you try to make the horse look a little more realistic? And some different types?
Like the colors in both!