Draft 35: Almost there; need the figure to be squatting under bar with hips lower (rock-bottom squat). This is getting close...letters indicate nice motion. Also, experiment with different shades of darker blue as well as black/grey
Draft 29: I like this one. I'd prefer the lifter to be down in a squat position with the weight overhead (same wide grip). It's a tad bright...think the lettering would go better with the colors from draft 27 or 28
Draft #15: shield is an interesting feature. Can we try deleting head figure in middle, thus moving lettering slightly higher up the shield. Experiment with some different colors as well i.e. black, grays, darker blues.
Draft #24: Let's try this one with black and gray lettering, all letters the same height, with unbent barbell (three plates on each end) resting in the same position above.
Couple of notes - we are going for "industrial" and "muscle-man" logos. Think 'chiseled stone' and 'industrial metal'...
Also, the colors are very attractive, BUT... we want TOUGH! So, maybe, darker colors...
Following are notes on specific drafts:
Draft 1 : one star...small letters and too-small figure
Drafts 2 & 3: two stars...conveys idea..not too exciting
Draft 4: three stars...overhead barbell position a plus...can't see head very well
Draft 5: three stars....colors good...figure too small for barbell...barbell position may mislead some
Draft 6...three stars...good art...not as good as draft 7
Draft 7...four stars...good research...denotes motion...perhaps slightly smaller head and barbell plate
Draft 8...three stars...nice design although non-specific
MycroBurst permits you to submit unlimited designs with unlimited variations. However, if you are providing 2 or 3 different color versions of the same logo in one draft, please make sure that if the particular draft gets finalized, each color version should be separated before you will send the final files.
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The weights, however are GREAT - we can definitely work with that!
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Further feedback:
We are looking for some "grungy-er" colors. So, darker, grittier, industrial...
Let's definitely get some green in there.
We're looking for heavy fonts. Substantial and stable in appearance... Think Stonehenge - hand-cut or carved stone...
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Couple of notes - we are going for "industrial" and "muscle-man" logos. Think 'chiseled stone' and 'industrial metal'...
Also, the colors are very attractive, BUT... we want TOUGH! So, maybe, darker colors...
Following are notes on specific drafts:
Draft 1 : one star...small letters and too-small figure
Drafts 2 & 3: two stars...conveys idea..not too exciting
Draft 4: three stars...overhead barbell position a plus...can't see head very well
Draft 5: three stars....colors good...figure too small for barbell...barbell position may mislead some
Draft 6...three stars...good art...not as good as draft 7
Draft 7...four stars...good research...denotes motion...perhaps slightly smaller head and barbell plate
Draft 8...three stars...nice design although non-specific
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MycroBurst permits you to submit unlimited designs with unlimited variations. However, if you are providing 2 or 3 different color versions of the same logo in one draft, please make sure that if the particular draft gets finalized, each color version should be separated before you will send the final files.
Thanks,
MB/LDG/LS Team