I like the addition of flaming icons to the top bar!
The ribbon looks good too.
Top bar/ribbon area:
Can you lose the red background when the home is highlighted? They should be kind of like roll over images...when you roll over them then they're on fire. Also, the home should be on fire, but non of the others unless you're on that page (ie. downloads on the download page)
The highlighted image needs to be more subtle. so fire and illuminated text. thats it.
TV area:
can you make the tv power button red? I think orange looks kinda funny.
This is much better than before. Thanks. I've got a few more changes though.
Top ribbon/bar area:
Could I see a version with a cross section of logs in a row for each link/logo 'burned' into the wood, but with colour. Including a soft/slight drop shadow on each.
Can you make that with more of a ribbon sheen/texture?
BUY NOW needs to be red or something dynamic in the to right area.
Colour the other christmas balls, so Home=RED, Contact=Yellow, Downloads=GREEN.
Add a drop shadow to make it look like they're suspended in front of the background.
Make the highlighted 'home' more obvious, maybe a glow? or as if the christmas ball "lit up" from inside where the logo is?
TV area:
Fix the drop shadow so it looks like it's hanging 'off the wall' with a softer, bigger, darker drop shadow...just a tweak.
Make the tv power light red or orange.
Lose the bow.
Sign/Logo area:
Add a drop shadow to the logo, like in the packaging. Needs to 'jump' off the page a bit more.
DVD package area:
Make the DVD a bit bigger or more dynamic. It should look enticing like #10.
Bottom area:
Lose the credits. Add some links at the bottom to the links at the top, but only in HTML style links, just text.
Twitter Feed:
should be like our twitter page. Orange.
Background:
Make it fade out, or lighten up toward the bottom. And add semi translucent boxes like #10 for some of the text etc.
I think that's it for now...thanks for the revisions, good work.
I really like where you're going with this. It's very clean, and incorporates the elements we've created very nicely.
Top ribbon/bar area:
Could I see a version with a cross section of logs in a row for each link/logo 'burned' into the wood, but with colour. Including a soft/slight drop shadow on each.
Can you make that orange/yellow ribbon, orange and gold? With more of a ribbon sheen/texture?
Make the home button a gingerbread house.
Make the highlighted 'home' a little less obvious...maybe a yellow glow instead and highlighted text?
TV area:
Fix the drop shadow so it looks like it's hanging 'off the wall', not sitting, or hovering on the bg. Like, its on the wall, not on a surface. More like draft 8, but have the shadow going off the bottom right corner.
Make the tv power light red or orange.
Sign/Logo area:
Add a drop shadow to this as well, as if it was hanging away from the page.
Also could I see an option with an old wooden style sign? Think north pole. Nicely 'painted' but with the wood texture.
like this: http://www.istockphoto.com/stock-photo-2976053-old-wooden-planks-and-nails-xxxl.php
DVD package/Premium Virtual... area:
Use the uploaded Testimonial font for the headline in this area. More like #8.
I think that's it for now...very nice work so far suketoejoeh
The christmas balls should be coloured the like the logos of the site, Blue for Facebook, Light blue Twitter, Red or white Youtube.
Add: a home christmas ball with a home icon. This should be obviously highlighted, backlit or glowing to show that is the page you're on. They youtube, twitter and facebook will just open a new link to those sites, not light up.
Add: a Contact christmas ball with mail icon.
Add: a Downloads christmas ball with download icon.
Move the ribbon up and make it smaller. Shouldn't go behind the Festive Inferno logo. More like the Orabrush site.
Make the background the original white birch bark image, not brownish.
Add: a buy now button to the top right corner.
Change the buy now button to GILL SANS MT BOLD font. Add an Exclamation point.
Add: a twitter feed box.
Add: a 'quotes' box, which is like a cycling RSS feed that shows what people have commented on the video on youtube.
Make the video box area a HDTV, the file is uploaded. iStock_000011638870Small.jpg
Cut off the base and drop shadow it to the wall so it looks mounted. The 'quotes' box will go right under this.
The design should be clean/fresh but incorporate the bark. Basically, it's a clean page, sleek but using festive elements and staying 'natural' with the birch bark background. The background should fade off at the bottom 1/3 into white, so we don't repeat the birch bark bg file.
MAIN PAGE:
TWITTER BUTTON (with number of followers)
FACEBOOK BUTTON (with number of fans)
LIKE BUTTON (with updating likes)
YOUTUBE BUTTON (with updating views)
BUY NOW! BUTTON (links to the paypal which we will set up)
A 4:3 aspect ratio video window (with the youtube video on it - we are creating this video)
OUR LOGO (see files section) - FI_LOGO_1801.eps
THE BIRCH BARK BACKGROUND (see files section) - bg_birch_1799.jpg
Please download and use the elements from our DVD package in the photoshop file - http://www.sendspace.com/file/yuryrc
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one draft has the logs for the nav,
one draft has the active bulb on fire,
a few of the drafts have a wooden sign with snow for the logo's backdrop,
one draft has the logo on the board without the drop shadow,
the facebook and twitter content varies in size and placement for each draft,
the buy now button in the nav is blue in one draft,
the play button on the TV is black on one draft,
and one draft has the dvd on the left.
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I like the addition of flaming icons to the top bar!
The ribbon looks good too.
Top bar/ribbon area:
Can you lose the red background when the home is highlighted? They should be kind of like roll over images...when you roll over them then they're on fire. Also, the home should be on fire, but non of the others unless you're on that page (ie. downloads on the download page)
The highlighted image needs to be more subtle. so fire and illuminated text. thats it.
TV area:
can you make the tv power button red? I think orange looks kinda funny.
I've already submit the revision in #12
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THANKS FOR ALL YOUR HELP THUS FAR, I'VE EXTENDED THE CONTEST FOR 3 MORE DAYS.
Can you extend the contest. Then I will upload my best design for you.
Regards
Xtilez
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Thanks for submitting! Here are something to hone the project a bit.
Use the eps logo file. That is our branding, so we'll need to stick with it. Add a drop shadow like the package file for that.
Background:
Fade out on the bottom, not the middle.
Top ribbon/bar area:
The button links need to be more 'punchy'. I need something dynamic up here.
I like the like button idea.
Can you make that with more of a ribbon sheen/texture?
BUY NOW needs to be red or something dynamic in the to right area.
TV area:
Fix the drop shadow so it looks like it's hanging 'off the wall' with a softer, bigger, darker drop shadow.
Make the tv power light red or orange.
DVD package area:
Make the DVD package orange.
Twitter Feed:
should be like our twitter page. Orange.
Thanks! It's much improved from your last design. Cheers.
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http://www.dafont.com/search.php?psize=m&q=christmas+card
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This is much better than before. Thanks. I've got a few more changes though.
Top ribbon/bar area:
Could I see a version with a cross section of logs in a row for each link/logo 'burned' into the wood, but with colour. Including a soft/slight drop shadow on each.
Can you make that with more of a ribbon sheen/texture?
BUY NOW needs to be red or something dynamic in the to right area.
Colour the other christmas balls, so Home=RED, Contact=Yellow, Downloads=GREEN.
Add a drop shadow to make it look like they're suspended in front of the background.
Make the highlighted 'home' more obvious, maybe a glow? or as if the christmas ball "lit up" from inside where the logo is?
TV area:
Fix the drop shadow so it looks like it's hanging 'off the wall' with a softer, bigger, darker drop shadow...just a tweak.
Make the tv power light red or orange.
Lose the bow.
Sign/Logo area:
Add a drop shadow to the logo, like in the packaging. Needs to 'jump' off the page a bit more.
DVD package area:
Make the DVD a bit bigger or more dynamic. It should look enticing like #10.
Bottom area:
Lose the credits. Add some links at the bottom to the links at the top, but only in HTML style links, just text.
Twitter Feed:
should be like our twitter page. Orange.
Background:
Make it fade out, or lighten up toward the bottom. And add semi translucent boxes like #10 for some of the text etc.
I think that's it for now...thanks for the revisions, good work.
Porteur du Projet
I really like where you're going with this. It's very clean, and incorporates the elements we've created very nicely.
Top ribbon/bar area:
Could I see a version with a cross section of logs in a row for each link/logo 'burned' into the wood, but with colour. Including a soft/slight drop shadow on each.
Can you make that orange/yellow ribbon, orange and gold? With more of a ribbon sheen/texture?
Make the home button a gingerbread house.
Make the highlighted 'home' a little less obvious...maybe a yellow glow instead and highlighted text?
TV area:
Fix the drop shadow so it looks like it's hanging 'off the wall', not sitting, or hovering on the bg. Like, its on the wall, not on a surface. More like draft 8, but have the shadow going off the bottom right corner.
Make the tv power light red or orange.
Sign/Logo area:
Add a drop shadow to this as well, as if it was hanging away from the page.
Also could I see an option with an old wooden style sign? Think north pole. Nicely 'painted' but with the wood texture.
like this: http://www.istockphoto.com/stock-photo-2976053-old-wooden-planks-and-nails-xxxl.php
DVD package/Premium Virtual... area:
Use the uploaded Testimonial font for the headline in this area. More like #8.
I think that's it for now...very nice work so far suketoejoeh
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The christmas balls should be coloured the like the logos of the site, Blue for Facebook, Light blue Twitter, Red or white Youtube.
Add: a home christmas ball with a home icon. This should be obviously highlighted, backlit or glowing to show that is the page you're on. They youtube, twitter and facebook will just open a new link to those sites, not light up.
Add: a Contact christmas ball with mail icon.
Add: a Downloads christmas ball with download icon.
Move the ribbon up and make it smaller. Shouldn't go behind the Festive Inferno logo. More like the Orabrush site.
Make the background the original white birch bark image, not brownish.
Add: a buy now button to the top right corner.
Change the buy now button to GILL SANS MT BOLD font. Add an Exclamation point.
Add: a twitter feed box.
Add: a 'quotes' box, which is like a cycling RSS feed that shows what people have commented on the video on youtube.
Make the video box area a HDTV, the file is uploaded. iStock_000011638870Small.jpg
Cut off the base and drop shadow it to the wall so it looks mounted. The 'quotes' box will go right under this.
The design should be clean/fresh but incorporate the bark. Basically, it's a clean page, sleek but using festive elements and staying 'natural' with the birch bark background. The background should fade off at the bottom 1/3 into white, so we don't repeat the birch bark bg file.
i'll submit design asap.
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MAIN PAGE:
TWITTER BUTTON (with number of followers)
FACEBOOK BUTTON (with number of fans)
LIKE BUTTON (with updating likes)
YOUTUBE BUTTON (with updating views)
BUY NOW! BUTTON (links to the paypal which we will set up)
A 4:3 aspect ratio video window (with the youtube video on it - we are creating this video)
OUR LOGO (see files section) - FI_LOGO_1801.eps
THE BIRCH BARK BACKGROUND (see files section) - bg_birch_1799.jpg
Please download and use the elements from our DVD package in the photoshop file - http://www.sendspace.com/file/yuryrc
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http://www.sendspace.com/file/yuryrc
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Also, we would like to be able to change the videos as they are created, so open-ended media input is important.