Thank you, Wibbiewabbit. I really like the lettering,layout and overall effect; the doorway is important so if you reestablish that. Please add the author's name. The little girl looks too big - its roughly 40-50 feet from the doorway to where she should be in the cul-de-sac. We don't need to have her looking back after all. The view is facing east. She should be headed south,south-east, towards the right of the frame.
I agree, Garbanzo. Lets forget about actually showing the little girl's face. Thanks for putting the door frame back in. The picture was taken early in the morning - facing east (re shadow placement) The little girl should be headed somewhat south (to the right)and in the middle/right side of the cul-de-sac. The letters appear a little blockish - try a smoother font?
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1. Girl skipping away needs to be smaller. The distance from that point in the cul-de-sac to the porch is roughly 40-50 feet.
2. Girl should have blond hair and be thinner; and looking back furtively.
3. Cleaver is what is depicted. Should be a butcher knife.
4. Need author's name at bottom.
5. Would like to see door frame from original pix.
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Porteur du Projet
Thank you, Wibbiewabbit. I really like the lettering,layout and overall effect; the doorway is important so if you reestablish that. Please add the author's name. The little girl looks too big - its roughly 40-50 feet from the doorway to where she should be in the cul-de-sac. We don't need to have her looking back after all. The view is facing east. She should be headed south,south-east, towards the right of the frame.
Porteur du Projet
I agree, Garbanzo. Lets forget about actually showing the little girl's face. Thanks for putting the door frame back in. The picture was taken early in the morning - facing east (re shadow placement) The little girl should be headed somewhat south (to the right)and in the middle/right side of the cul-de-sac. The letters appear a little blockish - try a smoother font?
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it is really hard to reflect feeling of little girl face in small picture.
Porteur du Projet
Nice initial effort!
1. Girl skipping away needs to be smaller. The distance from that point in the cul-de-sac to the porch is roughly 40-50 feet.
2. Girl should have blond hair and be thinner; and looking back furtively.
3. Cleaver is what is depicted. Should be a butcher knife.
4. Need author's name at bottom.
5. Would like to see door frame from original pix.