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3 septembre 2011 23:26 fgallagher Porteur du Projet
Hi dany96,
Regarding #5: I like your font style much better in the earlier drafts. Funny how you think things will look and then you see them. I think what would help is to thicken or increase the font size of the word "rentals" to match the font size of "Coast & Valley" and go back to the two colors as in #2 - #4. The letter spacing of the word "Rentals" is great and helps to balance the name. With #5 let's try inversing the wave, flipping it so that it appears as though it is cresting to the left across the valley (similar to #2) and eliminate the left side window pane in the middle part of the valley.
I also like the symmetry of the valley/house icon in #4. If the water icon could be tweaked to appear more like a cresting wave and maybe also similar to the wave in #1 & #2 just not cutting across the valley/house icon so you get the full symmetry of the valley/house - that might be an interesting possibility.
Thanks for your time tweaking this logo concept design. Appreciated.
Frank
3 septembre 2011 13:05 fgallagher Porteur du Projet
Hi dany96,
I like new color choice. I would choose a third color for the words "&" and "rentals" in order to have them stand out. I would like to see some different font choices that might represent the words in the company name. For example the word, "valley" could have a western font style. The word coast could have a "flowing-like" font representing water, the ocean or the coast. I like the wave cresting in design #3. I would like to see that placed somehow to the left or lower of the valley icon so that it does not look like the a tsunami about to flood the valley and the house icon. Incorporating the house into the valley icon was very smart. I think you're onto something with this design and I like the way it progressing.
Thanks!
Frank
3 septembre 2011 10:53 fgallagher Porteur du Projet
Hi dany96!
I really like how you incorporated the wave and the look of the valley and an indication of residential in the valley. It is simple and effective. The blue may be a good color choice for the water & coast. I'm not crazy about the grey as I feel it's too lite. Maybe a different color choice for the word valley and the valley design. What do marketers recommend in order to stand out? A good first draft!
Thank you,
Frank
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Regarding #5: I like your font style much better in the earlier drafts. Funny how you think things will look and then you see them. I think what would help is to thicken or increase the font size of the word "rentals" to match the font size of "Coast & Valley" and go back to the two colors as in #2 - #4. The letter spacing of the word "Rentals" is great and helps to balance the name. With #5 let's try inversing the wave, flipping it so that it appears as though it is cresting to the left across the valley (similar to #2) and eliminate the left side window pane in the middle part of the valley.
I also like the symmetry of the valley/house icon in #4. If the water icon could be tweaked to appear more like a cresting wave and maybe also similar to the wave in #1 & #2 just not cutting across the valley/house icon so you get the full symmetry of the valley/house - that might be an interesting possibility.
Thanks for your time tweaking this logo concept design. Appreciated.
Frank
Porteur du Projet
I like new color choice. I would choose a third color for the words "&" and "rentals" in order to have them stand out. I would like to see some different font choices that might represent the words in the company name. For example the word, "valley" could have a western font style. The word coast could have a "flowing-like" font representing water, the ocean or the coast. I like the wave cresting in design #3. I would like to see that placed somehow to the left or lower of the valley icon so that it does not look like the a tsunami about to flood the valley and the house icon. Incorporating the house into the valley icon was very smart. I think you're onto something with this design and I like the way it progressing.
Thanks!
Frank
Porteur du Projet
I really like how you incorporated the wave and the look of the valley and an indication of residential in the valley. It is simple and effective. The blue may be a good color choice for the water & coast. I'm not crazy about the grey as I feel it's too lite. Maybe a different color choice for the word valley and the valley design. What do marketers recommend in order to stand out? A good first draft!
Thank you,
Frank