#156, 159 - i like it with the stars - and with the seperation of the C and i but can we try the C not on an angle - so it's a straight C.
(but those little C's with the star in them in the bottom right corner we want to keep exactly as they are on that angle).
and then can we please have a few of the speckles removed from the background (we like the distressed and cracks in the letters but the specks around the outside we would like to see removed).
thank you
#137 & 138 - really like your logo, could we see 2 variations on it...
1 - keep everything the same but make a slight space between the C and the i so that it doesn't look like a G
2 - make that same change with the c and i, but also could we see those 2 little stars above the i's instead of stars be small 3 point crowns...
#37 - could i see your logo in the pink colors i specified rather than the reddish tones - and also could i see it with stars for the dots above the i's?
Hi guys,
I appreciate how creative your trying to get with the word CiRBiE but some are coming off as too hard to read… and that is one of the most important elements for me is having it be cool and edgy but still legible whether it be small or large.
I’m not looking to have any kind of drawing of a girl included in the logo… looking for more abstract items included… eg. The lips idea, and the stars over the i’s
Also some of the designs are coming off a little to young for this artist… she is in her 20’s and I can’t go with a logo that would be suited for a teenager.
For a few of you I have some specific comments that I think could make the designs more suited to what we are specifically looking for.
Thank you everyone,
Riley
#85 – could you please try tidying the background up a bit… it looks a little messy when the logo is in a smaller size. – also would be cool to see it in the pink colors she is looking for.
#93 – could you try the logo in a couple different fonts – I’m not sure that font is totally working. It would be good to see a couple other variations.
#79 – could you try a different font as well, I like the side angled lips, but not 100% sure about the font yet.
#76 – not crazy about the CRI being larger than the rest… but I do like the crown above the I.
Would you try making the CRBE in the bigger size and then the I’s in smaller size (also I’s should be lowercase with the crown or star as the dot above the i)
#72 – like the decorative stuff around the logo – but can’t read the name. would need to see a more legible name
#67 – like the idea of the backward E but something about this logo is just a little too young for the artist… if you could make it a bit more edgy while still being fun that would be ideal.
#59 – like this one – could you try a version that has more of a closed mouth lips… might be a bit provocative to have the open hole in the middle of the lips.
Also would be cool to see a version without the lips, just the logo as it is.
#55 – like the symmetry of the design – would need to see how the E could be a bit easier to read, also maybe try losing that little decoration to either side of the C and E, as it makes it difficult to read that the C and E are letters and not just curly cues leading into the IRBI
#46 – can I see it without the sword and flower? That makes it a little too dated, lets see with just the logo
#21 – is there a way to use that C that is in the star as the C in her name (lose the C that you have in the regular font) – not sure if it would look good, but could be cool.
#15 – too pale to read properly, can all the letters be the same color and lose the crown above the R.
Also perhaps try increasing the size of the stars above the i’s
MycroBurst permits you to submit unlimited designs with unlimited variations. However, if you show 2 or 3 different color versions of the same logo in one draft, please make sure that if that draft gets finalized, each color version is separated before final files are sent out.
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Porteur du Projet
thanks
Porteur du Projet
the C from 156 with the no speckles from 166
thank you!
Porteur du Projet
(but those little C's with the star in them in the bottom right corner we want to keep exactly as they are on that angle).
and then can we please have a few of the speckles removed from the background (we like the distressed and cracks in the letters but the specks around the outside we would like to see removed).
thank you
Porteur du Projet
1 - keep everything the same but make a slight space between the C and the i so that it doesn't look like a G
2 - make that same change with the c and i, but also could we see those 2 little stars above the i's instead of stars be small 3 point crowns...
#37 - could i see your logo in the pink colors i specified rather than the reddish tones - and also could i see it with stars for the dots above the i's?
thanks guys, very nice work so far.
Porteur du Projet
I appreciate how creative your trying to get with the word CiRBiE but some are coming off as too hard to read… and that is one of the most important elements for me is having it be cool and edgy but still legible whether it be small or large.
I’m not looking to have any kind of drawing of a girl included in the logo… looking for more abstract items included… eg. The lips idea, and the stars over the i’s
Also some of the designs are coming off a little to young for this artist… she is in her 20’s and I can’t go with a logo that would be suited for a teenager.
For a few of you I have some specific comments that I think could make the designs more suited to what we are specifically looking for.
Thank you everyone,
Riley
#85 – could you please try tidying the background up a bit… it looks a little messy when the logo is in a smaller size. – also would be cool to see it in the pink colors she is looking for.
#93 – could you try the logo in a couple different fonts – I’m not sure that font is totally working. It would be good to see a couple other variations.
#79 – could you try a different font as well, I like the side angled lips, but not 100% sure about the font yet.
#76 – not crazy about the CRI being larger than the rest… but I do like the crown above the I.
Would you try making the CRBE in the bigger size and then the I’s in smaller size (also I’s should be lowercase with the crown or star as the dot above the i)
#72 – like the decorative stuff around the logo – but can’t read the name. would need to see a more legible name
#67 – like the idea of the backward E but something about this logo is just a little too young for the artist… if you could make it a bit more edgy while still being fun that would be ideal.
#59 – like this one – could you try a version that has more of a closed mouth lips… might be a bit provocative to have the open hole in the middle of the lips.
Also would be cool to see a version without the lips, just the logo as it is.
#55 – like the symmetry of the design – would need to see how the E could be a bit easier to read, also maybe try losing that little decoration to either side of the C and E, as it makes it difficult to read that the C and E are letters and not just curly cues leading into the IRBI
#46 – can I see it without the sword and flower? That makes it a little too dated, lets see with just the logo
#21 – is there a way to use that C that is in the star as the C in her name (lose the C that you have in the regular font) – not sure if it would look good, but could be cool.
#15 – too pale to read properly, can all the letters be the same color and lose the crown above the R.
Also perhaps try increasing the size of the stars above the i’s
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MycroBurst permits you to submit unlimited designs with unlimited variations. However, if you show 2 or 3 different color versions of the same logo in one draft, please make sure that if that draft gets finalized, each color version is separated before final files are sent out.
Thanks,
MB/LDG Team