10 novembre 2010 05:28 Captainbill Porteur du Projet
#20. I like the font and the way the name is laid out. The LLC being very small works.
The design captures all the concepts.
The house is fairly large.
I don't know if this concept would work given that I'll be using a separate head shot photo.
10 novembre 2010 05:18 Captainbill Porteur du Projet
#19 the airplane is nice. The large C, which I had suggested earlier doesn't seem to work like I thought it would.
10 novembre 2010 05:16 Captainbill Porteur du Projet
#18 is a little busy for me and the airplane is very small.
9 novembre 2010 10:21 Captainbill Porteur du Projet
angelice #9
The concept is good.
I'm unsure about the black font in "First Class Service". I understand that it's a subtle change from the company name. Can you try a couple different subtle colors?
The font appears to be Arial. Can I see one with Georgia and another with Bodoni MT
The logo will be used on business cards, advertising and yard signs.
9 novembre 2010 06:59 Captainbill Porteur du Projet
viana # 7
The airplane is very representative.
I like a little more classy font. Wish I could explain it better.
The draft appears to me as three separate items, plane top of globe, and name, and not tied together as a logo.
I've changed the tag line "exceptional service" to "First Class Service".
9 novembre 2010 06:55 Captainbill Porteur du Projet
cmariesdesignhut #6
The concept is there, but the airplane is not the shape of a 310 or 747.
Also it needs to be tied together somehow as a logo. It appears to be separate elements.
The blue font may be a little too casual. I like the font used in the exceptional service.
8 novembre 2010 19:26 Captainbill Porteur du Projet
The photo should not be part of the logo.
We're dropping the LLC because of the length of the name.
The name Captain Bill Realty needs to be on one line.
Exceptional Service is a good tag line.
There must be a jet airliner prominent in the logo.
8 novembre 2010 15:39 Captainbill Porteur du Projet
Vyteninho # 2
There must be a 747 or A310 type jet incorporated. Also the name must be Captain Bill Realty (not just Captain Bill)
I would prefer the font for the name to be a more classy font (classy but legible) with all the letters being the same color.
The star does not work in the design I'm anticipating.
With any trailing lines like on the C, think of a jet contrail, which is less serpentine like.
The entire logo must project a highly professional image and instill trust in the company.
The logo will be the focal point on a business card and advertisements.
8 novembre 2010 11:49 Captainbill Porteur du Projet
It could also have the name across with a neat font, and above the name a contrail somewhere near the center of the name going to the left then curving up and right, with the jet airplane at the top of the contrail heading up and right.
8 novembre 2010 11:48 Captainbill Porteur du Projet
Please eliminate the LLC in the name.
I can envision something like a huge C followed by (centered from top to bottom in the C) aptain Bill Realty.
At the right of the name is a jet, as seen from the top looking down on it, heading to the right. From the two outboard engines, there would be contrails that go back to the left and frame the name.
The C (which is the beginning letter for Captain would be about the size of the width of the jet engines for balance.
I’m not married to that idea but it may be a start.
The contrails may add motion and possibility interest to the design.
8 novembre 2010 11:12 Captainbill Porteur du Projet
I don't know if this helps or not, but I'll use the logo on business cards and advertising pieces, so it should be capable of being sized to fit these different media.
8 novembre 2010 11:10 Captainbill Porteur du Projet
sportserh,
I understand your concept, with the circle probably representing the globe, and the houses representing the business I'm in now. However, it appears busy and difficult to find the airplane, which appears to be a small type airplane instead of a 747. It also appears to emphasize the houses.
The company name shouldn't be broken up into two lines. It needs to flow together.
8 novembre 2010 11:00 Captainbill Porteur du Projet
designpassionate,
Something more corporate because I'll use my head shot separate from the logo.
The name Captain Bill is simply for name recognition. People will remember that name when they won't remember Bill Travis.
Then when people who don't know me see Captain Bill, they have no idea what the name signifies. I'm asked if I was a military captain, or a ship captain, or just decided to call my self captain.
Since I was a Pan Am captain I want to somehow build the Boeing 747 or Airbus A300 into the logo. However, there should be no reference to Pan Am or the aircraft name.
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Porteur du Projet
I've chosen # 32 as the design that I feel fits my vision the closest.
Porteur du Projet
The design captures all the concepts.
The house is fairly large.
I don't know if this concept would work given that I'll be using a separate head shot photo.
Porteur du Projet
Porteur du Projet
Porteur du Projet
The concept is good.
I'm unsure about the black font in "First Class Service". I understand that it's a subtle change from the company name. Can you try a couple different subtle colors?
The font appears to be Arial. Can I see one with Georgia and another with Bodoni MT
The logo will be used on business cards, advertising and yard signs.
Porteur du Projet
The airplane is very representative.
I like a little more classy font. Wish I could explain it better.
The draft appears to me as three separate items, plane top of globe, and name, and not tied together as a logo.
I've changed the tag line "exceptional service" to "First Class Service".
Porteur du Projet
The concept is there, but the airplane is not the shape of a 310 or 747.
Also it needs to be tied together somehow as a logo. It appears to be separate elements.
The blue font may be a little too casual. I like the font used in the exceptional service.
Porteur du Projet
The photo should not be part of the logo.
We're dropping the LLC because of the length of the name.
The name Captain Bill Realty needs to be on one line.
Exceptional Service is a good tag line.
There must be a jet airliner prominent in the logo.
Porteur du Projet
There must be a 747 or A310 type jet incorporated. Also the name must be Captain Bill Realty (not just Captain Bill)
I would prefer the font for the name to be a more classy font (classy but legible) with all the letters being the same color.
The star does not work in the design I'm anticipating.
With any trailing lines like on the C, think of a jet contrail, which is less serpentine like.
The entire logo must project a highly professional image and instill trust in the company.
The logo will be the focal point on a business card and advertisements.
Porteur du Projet
Porteur du Projet
I can envision something like a huge C followed by (centered from top to bottom in the C) aptain Bill Realty.
At the right of the name is a jet, as seen from the top looking down on it, heading to the right. From the two outboard engines, there would be contrails that go back to the left and frame the name.
The C (which is the beginning letter for Captain would be about the size of the width of the jet engines for balance.
I’m not married to that idea but it may be a start.
The contrails may add motion and possibility interest to the design.
Porteur du Projet
Porteur du Projet
I understand your concept, with the circle probably representing the globe, and the houses representing the business I'm in now. However, it appears busy and difficult to find the airplane, which appears to be a small type airplane instead of a 747. It also appears to emphasize the houses.
The company name shouldn't be broken up into two lines. It needs to flow together.
Porteur du Projet
Something more corporate because I'll use my head shot separate from the logo.
The name Captain Bill is simply for name recognition. People will remember that name when they won't remember Bill Travis.
Then when people who don't know me see Captain Bill, they have no idea what the name signifies. I'm asked if I was a military captain, or a ship captain, or just decided to call my self captain.
Since I was a Pan Am captain I want to somehow build the Boeing 747 or Airbus A300 into the logo. However, there should be no reference to Pan Am or the aircraft name.
I would like to understand, are you looking for a character logo, picturing yourself? Or something more corporate?
Regards