designelicious (#80) - also really like this draft! it could easily be used for nightclub connect also.
- could you remove the dots on the outside of the "c"?
- also we'd like to reduce the heavy "3D", lighting and surface treatments
- take out the space between "restaurant" and "connect!"
we really like everything you've done with this concept and appreciate you showing us so many variations. we'd like to see you try one additional concept before the competition is over. we recently found the following logo and thought it was a great fit for our company. the neat thing is that the "C" is the design element and there's no need for an "R" in the mark because the word "Restaurant" can go inside of it. This way it would also be easy to switch it out to "Nightclub".
we'd like if you could work on a "C" that would be very similar to the "C" shown in the above logo. we'd like to maintain the spherical shape in the perspective, and just change the circles to be smaller, or become lines, or do something else to make it your own.
designelicious (#86) - thanks for the new concepts and really like the variations. - we'd like to take this one and make the "c" and "r" more integrated and equal priority.
- also like your attention to design detail, but would like to move away from the heavy "3D" and a bit more towards traditional. would like the focus of the logo to be the form more than the lighting and surface treatments.
- The "C" and "R" should both be solid and then use the dots to connect or integrate them.
mdsgrafix (#73) - like the fade for the circles and new font for "R". Could you also adjust the font of the words to be more congruent with the "R". It should match or at least go together better.
Also, the lines are still too plain and generic. We'd like those to be more dynamic and really stand out (maybe shadow, depth, thinning out at ends, etc.). We'd like to see some different creative options.
#33 - could you add more dynamic elements? we'd like to see gradients, depth and want the logo to pop.
#46 - we'd like to see a different integration of the "C" with the circle. also, more depth and dynamic elements.
#40 - could you revise to include some more dynamic elements in the mark as well? We're trying to convey a feeling of "Connected" within our logo and itd be great if that was portrayed in a creative, powerful way.
MycroBurst permits you to submit unlimited designs with unlimited variations. However, if you show 2 or 3 different color versions of the same logo in one draft, please make sure that if that draft gets finalized, each color version is separated before final files are sent out.
Thanks to all the designers who have submitted logos so far.
#50 - Could you integrate the "C" into the mark a bit more? We like the size of the dots and would like to see the "R" and "C" integrated or overlapping in some way.
#32 - We love the font you used for the text and the way you've integrated the "R" and "C" in this one. We like the gradient as well. Could you change the dots on the outside to add a bit more complexity? For instance, perhaps part of the circle is a solid line and part is dots.
#42 - We'd like to see less dots and have the elements integrated more. It feels like there are too many things going on so can you reduce the number of dots and integrate the dots into the rest of the design more?
Draft #19 - We'd like to see some more dynamic elements or gradient and possibly dots incorporated similar to http://behance.vo.llnwd.net/profiles/75091/projects/3350727/8de245dfe34389d319455c83696def1f.jpg
Draft #21 - Like the unique take on the outer circular perimeter here. Would like to see the red eclipse reversed so it's a continuous line off the bottom of the "C". Also would like to see a bit brighter red to pop more off the dark background. We like the diagonal orientation of the "R" and "C" but would like to see a different type of connection between the letters, with both letters larger and more intertwined, overlapped or connected. Also please remove the underline under the name.
Draft #24 - Love the "R" and "C" intertwined, looks professional and established. Please completely remove the outer square perimeter and we'd like to see a different font for the text portion of the logo; perhaps a san-serif font such as a GillSansMT paired with the serif letters in the mark to provide contrast so the mark pops more.
Draft #4 - Would love to see this with some of the features of the following logo: http://www.mycroburst.com/drafts/display/contest/23817/draft/215809
Specifically, the light to dark vertical gradient, rounded edges, and is there a very slight bevel/emboss?
Draft #12 - Very nice mark. Concept is excellent and we like the way you incorporated the dots into the C. Only feedback is that it feels a bit static. First, we would like to see the elements list in feedback for #4 above. Second, would like the dots to have a bit more complexity such as changes in size and/or color (see example below). http://behance.vo.llnwd.net/profiles/75091/projects/3350727/8de245dfe34389d319455c83696def1f.jpg
Draft #14 - Would like color to be less powder and more solid/bold. Also would like to see some more complexity also like the disc (solid circle) as three dimensional similar to below: http://www.mycroburst.com/drafts/display/contest/49773/draft/393038. Also could we see a version with some rounded edges on some of the corners of the letters?
OVERALL FEEDBACK:
--- We'd like to see more use of finishing elements like gradients, small variations in colors, sizes of dots, slight bevel/emboss. The goal here with this feedback is to get logos that feel more dynamic and alive.
--- Especially love the following two marks below. Something that would successfully combine the below two marks, with "R" and "C" either intertwined or interconnected would be excellent. We like the feelings of being dynamic/motion, custom/artistic and yet refined/high-end.
http://behance.vo.llnwd.net/profiles/75091/projects/3350727/8de245dfe34389d319455c83696def1f.jpg
http://www.mycroburst.com/drafts/display/contest/23817/draft/215809
Thank you everyone for your submissions so far! We wanted to send some initial feedback.
Draft #1 - Would like see the font of the word "RestaurantConnect!" different than the font used in the logo. Also make it more balanced and refined without an arrow. It'd be great if you could incorporate some more of the elements used in our example logos. Would like to see a version with a circular element and less chunky mark.
Draft #7 - Strong and powerful mark. We'd like to see a different font and colors that would go with our website. Need more color contrast with background. Would like to see this move away from abstract and more toward initials.
Draft #4 - Like the clean and professional look of the mark and font. R and C should be more integrated. Interaction between loop on R and C looks unfinished - maybe because of difference in line weight. Like the concept you're working on with the "connect" between the letter. Maybe incorporate some more of the elements from our example logos?
OTHER:
We'd be interested in seeing someone do a draft of a logo that combines the following logos in some creative way:
(a) http://www.behance.net/gallery/Ruben-Hestholm/2325374
(b) http://behance.vo.llnwd.net/profiles23/452203/projects/3096003/595a9e28fc67b286fe051f9cda170a18.jpg
(c) http://www.loovvool.com/works/caviar-productions
12 Commentaire récents
Porteur du Projet
(#86) - for this one could you also do a version where you put the "R" inside the "c" and then reduce the shadow on the "c" slightly?
thanks again!
melissa
Porteur du Projet
- could you remove the dots on the outside of the "c"?
- also we'd like to reduce the heavy "3D", lighting and surface treatments
- take out the space between "restaurant" and "connect!"
thanks!
melissa
Porteur du Projet
we really like everything you've done with this concept and appreciate you showing us so many variations. we'd like to see you try one additional concept before the competition is over. we recently found the following logo and thought it was a great fit for our company. the neat thing is that the "C" is the design element and there's no need for an "R" in the mark because the word "Restaurant" can go inside of it. This way it would also be easy to switch it out to "Nightclub".
http://mbstrategic.com/mbstrategic/mbstorage2/example.png
we'd like if you could work on a "C" that would be very similar to the "C" shown in the above logo. we'd like to maintain the spherical shape in the perspective, and just change the circles to be smaller, or become lines, or do something else to make it your own.
we'll look forward to seeing it!
thanks again,
melissa
Porteur du Projet
- also like your attention to design detail, but would like to move away from the heavy "3D" and a bit more towards traditional. would like the focus of the logo to be the form more than the lighting and surface treatments.
- The "C" and "R" should both be solid and then use the dots to connect or integrate them.
thanks again!
melissa
Porteur du Projet
Also, the lines are still too plain and generic. We'd like those to be more dynamic and really stand out (maybe shadow, depth, thinning out at ends, etc.). We'd like to see some different creative options.
thanks and definitely like the progress.
melissa
Porteur du Projet
#46 - we'd like to see a different integration of the "C" with the circle. also, more depth and dynamic elements.
#40 - could you revise to include some more dynamic elements in the mark as well? We're trying to convey a feeling of "Connected" within our logo and itd be great if that was portrayed in a creative, powerful way.
Thanks and more feedback to come!
Melissa
Employé(e)
MycroBurst permits you to submit unlimited designs with unlimited variations. However, if you show 2 or 3 different color versions of the same logo in one draft, please make sure that if that draft gets finalized, each color version is separated before final files are sent out.
Thanks,
MB/LDG Team
Porteur du Projet
#50 - Could you integrate the "C" into the mark a bit more? We like the size of the dots and would like to see the "R" and "C" integrated or overlapping in some way.
#32 - We love the font you used for the text and the way you've integrated the "R" and "C" in this one. We like the gradient as well. Could you change the dots on the outside to add a bit more complexity? For instance, perhaps part of the circle is a solid line and part is dots.
#42 - We'd like to see less dots and have the elements integrated more. It feels like there are too many things going on so can you reduce the number of dots and integrate the dots into the rest of the design more?
Thanks!
Melissa
Porteur du Projet
Draft #21 - Like the unique take on the outer circular perimeter here. Would like to see the red eclipse reversed so it's a continuous line off the bottom of the "C". Also would like to see a bit brighter red to pop more off the dark background. We like the diagonal orientation of the "R" and "C" but would like to see a different type of connection between the letters, with both letters larger and more intertwined, overlapped or connected. Also please remove the underline under the name.
Draft #24 - Love the "R" and "C" intertwined, looks professional and established. Please completely remove the outer square perimeter and we'd like to see a different font for the text portion of the logo; perhaps a san-serif font such as a GillSansMT paired with the serif letters in the mark to provide contrast so the mark pops more.
Thanks!
Melissa
Porteur du Projet
Draft #4 - Would love to see this with some of the features of the following logo: http://www.mycroburst.com/drafts/display/contest/23817/draft/215809
Specifically, the light to dark vertical gradient, rounded edges, and is there a very slight bevel/emboss?
Draft #12 - Very nice mark. Concept is excellent and we like the way you incorporated the dots into the C. Only feedback is that it feels a bit static. First, we would like to see the elements list in feedback for #4 above. Second, would like the dots to have a bit more complexity such as changes in size and/or color (see example below). http://behance.vo.llnwd.net/profiles/75091/projects/3350727/8de245dfe34389d319455c83696def1f.jpg
Draft #14 - Would like color to be less powder and more solid/bold. Also would like to see some more complexity also like the disc (solid circle) as three dimensional similar to below: http://www.mycroburst.com/drafts/display/contest/49773/draft/393038. Also could we see a version with some rounded edges on some of the corners of the letters?
Thanks!
Melissa
Porteur du Projet
--- We'd like to see more use of finishing elements like gradients, small variations in colors, sizes of dots, slight bevel/emboss. The goal here with this feedback is to get logos that feel more dynamic and alive.
--- Especially love the following two marks below. Something that would successfully combine the below two marks, with "R" and "C" either intertwined or interconnected would be excellent. We like the feelings of being dynamic/motion, custom/artistic and yet refined/high-end.
http://behance.vo.llnwd.net/profiles/75091/projects/3350727/8de245dfe34389d319455c83696def1f.jpg
http://www.mycroburst.com/drafts/display/contest/23817/draft/215809
Porteur du Projet
Draft #1 - Would like see the font of the word "RestaurantConnect!" different than the font used in the logo. Also make it more balanced and refined without an arrow. It'd be great if you could incorporate some more of the elements used in our example logos. Would like to see a version with a circular element and less chunky mark.
Draft #7 - Strong and powerful mark. We'd like to see a different font and colors that would go with our website. Need more color contrast with background. Would like to see this move away from abstract and more toward initials.
Draft #4 - Like the clean and professional look of the mark and font. R and C should be more integrated. Interaction between loop on R and C looks unfinished - maybe because of difference in line weight. Like the concept you're working on with the "connect" between the letter. Maybe incorporate some more of the elements from our example logos?
OTHER:
We'd be interested in seeing someone do a draft of a logo that combines the following logos in some creative way:
(a) http://www.behance.net/gallery/Ruben-Hestholm/2325374
(b) http://behance.vo.llnwd.net/profiles23/452203/projects/3096003/595a9e28fc67b286fe051f9cda170a18.jpg
(c) http://www.loovvool.com/works/caviar-productions
Thank you,
Melissa
RestaurantConnect!