Draft #24 - Excellent. Can you try to reverse the position of Fire & Safety and the GM initials? I realize you'll have to expand the diameter of the circle. Thanks.
Draft # 14 - Nice. Can you show me this in black and white, please?
Draft # 13 - Please show me a version with less "reflective" treatment on Fire & Safety.
Draft # 12 - Nice, very nice. What if you stacked the tag line on three lines inside the shield and then moved the GM above Fire & Safety?
Draft #10 - I think the color choice of Fire, Safety minimizes the words too much. Please try reversing the emphasis... Make Fire, Safety black and the "&" symbol the current color of fire and safety.
Draft #9 - Love this. Very clean. Can you add just a bit more definition to the horizontal hook on the "G"? Not a lot, just enough to make it read like "G".
Draft #5 - Please eliminate the elements above the flame icon. Also try a version where the flame icon becomes the "&" symbol.
Drafts #3 & 4 - Like the design, but the font used for GM resembles the font General Motors uses. Try a different font inside the shield icon.
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I sent you a note about Draft 28. Please let me know if you received it and can provide the modifications requested.
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Draft # 13 - Please show me a version with less "reflective" treatment on Fire & Safety.
Draft # 12 - Nice, very nice. What if you stacked the tag line on three lines inside the shield and then moved the GM above Fire & Safety?
Draft #10 - I think the color choice of Fire, Safety minimizes the words too much. Please try reversing the emphasis... Make Fire, Safety black and the "&" symbol the current color of fire and safety.
Draft #9 - Love this. Very clean. Can you add just a bit more definition to the horizontal hook on the "G"? Not a lot, just enough to make it read like "G".
Draft #5 - Please eliminate the elements above the flame icon. Also try a version where the flame icon becomes the "&" symbol.
Drafts #3 & 4 - Like the design, but the font used for GM resembles the font General Motors uses. Try a different font inside the shield icon.
Draft #1 - Nice. Clean.