Really like how this is very visual. However, we need the woman to be more neutral to appeal to all ethnicity. African American's are our biggest audience, but we want to cater to everybody. If it could be more universal vector, without so much detail... This might make more sense for us.
I really like how elegant this logo is, however we would like to see you incorporate the use of hair in the logo. If we could also see a little more contrast, I think this may be required to make the logo pop on a website.
Would it be possible to see another version from you? I feel you are really grasping the project requirements, but would love to see what else your creative mind can come up with.
MycroBurst permits you to submit unlimited designs with unlimited variations. However, if you show 2 or 3 different color versions of the same logo in one draft, please make sure that if that draft gets finalized, each color version is separated before final files are sent out.
Hi Indahfull, thank you for your quick submission of Draft #1.
In my opinion I don't feel any of the three items (vector art, "Hair" and "Blossom" really come together to make the logo sing. Generally, I feel like it's a bit too busy. I feel the word "hair" does not seem to come together with the wild "H" and the "air" font.
Also, the hair doesn't seem to flow like hair would, looks rather clumpy... Would like to see more elegance in the vector art as well. Hope this criticism isn't too harsh, just trying to be constructive. I do appreciate your submission and would love to see revisions!
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Porteur du Projet
Really like how this is very visual. However, we need the woman to be more neutral to appeal to all ethnicity. African American's are our biggest audience, but we want to cater to everybody. If it could be more universal vector, without so much detail... This might make more sense for us.
Porteur du Projet
I feel this has potential, but the vector art is not very clear. Would like to see more use of hair to make it more distinguishable.
Porteur du Projet
I really like how elegant this logo is, however we would like to see you incorporate the use of hair in the logo. If we could also see a little more contrast, I think this may be required to make the logo pop on a website.
Porteur du Projet
Loving the way this comes together and feels.
Would it be possible to see another version from you? I feel you are really grasping the project requirements, but would love to see what else your creative mind can come up with.
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MycroBurst permits you to submit unlimited designs with unlimited variations. However, if you show 2 or 3 different color versions of the same logo in one draft, please make sure that if that draft gets finalized, each color version is separated before final files are sent out.
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MB/LDG Team
Porteur du Projet
In my opinion I don't feel any of the three items (vector art, "Hair" and "Blossom" really come together to make the logo sing. Generally, I feel like it's a bit too busy. I feel the word "hair" does not seem to come together with the wild "H" and the "air" font.
Also, the hair doesn't seem to flow like hair would, looks rather clumpy... Would like to see more elegance in the vector art as well. Hope this criticism isn't too harsh, just trying to be constructive. I do appreciate your submission and would love to see revisions!