#33 is very strong
Comments
1. Change colors: use darker green from #29 or #30 and blue from from #31.
2. Keep the fading colors....
3. Change font to those used in #35
4. Use color for RX sign that will standout, catch the eye...
5. Consider using the 'R' in 'APOTHECARY' as another Rx sign??? Lets see what that looks like
6. Shadow/ 3D effect on ONLY mortar and pestle and capsules is a good idea
7. Make a trail of different shape pills, tablets, capsules...maybe from the within the mortar, down the side, across the words under the 'APOTHECARY'
thanks
1. font in #32 are good
2. Use of the Rx in Apothecary in # 29 is good
3. THe use of the mortar and pestle with capsules/tabs/pills like in #29
4. The tagline should be on one line
5. STAFL APOTHECARY should be in capital letters. Try emphasizing STAFL...vs not emphasizing
6. light green from #29 and light blue from #9 are appropriate colors
7. Use of shadows and/or fading color depth (like in #9)
8. Avoid A from German apotheke sign. Thanks though...
9. Since the word 'apothecary' is not often used in the US. Making the maortar and pestle obvious and maybe pills, capusles or tablets should be included somewhere.
Thanks
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Porteur du Projet
Comments
1. Change colors: use darker green from #29 or #30 and blue from from #31.
2. Keep the fading colors....
3. Change font to those used in #35
4. Use color for RX sign that will standout, catch the eye...
5. Consider using the 'R' in 'APOTHECARY' as another Rx sign??? Lets see what that looks like
6. Shadow/ 3D effect on ONLY mortar and pestle and capsules is a good idea
7. Make a trail of different shape pills, tablets, capsules...maybe from the within the mortar, down the side, across the words under the 'APOTHECARY'
thanks
Porteur du Projet
2. Use of the Rx in Apothecary in # 29 is good
3. THe use of the mortar and pestle with capsules/tabs/pills like in #29
4. The tagline should be on one line
5. STAFL APOTHECARY should be in capital letters. Try emphasizing STAFL...vs not emphasizing
6. light green from #29 and light blue from #9 are appropriate colors
7. Use of shadows and/or fading color depth (like in #9)
8. Avoid A from German apotheke sign. Thanks though...
9. Since the word 'apothecary' is not often used in the US. Making the maortar and pestle obvious and maybe pills, capusles or tablets should be included somewhere.
Thanks
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