Those entering late please study the BRIEF and these comments, there's no point in entering unless your:
1/ Going to understand our requirements
2/ Going to work from the idea's we've developed with designers so far
3/ Going to come up with unique twist's on the developing themes, using the requirements.
#Sumit128 - We love your designs, can you please work a little on changing the colour of the CALENDAR in #21#31#32 - Please use the colours you've used in the other design with the button. Also the text "SALES SYSTEM" under the "7 DAY" can you try that Justified please. (i.e. Streched to fit the "7Day").
# Octopus - Your designs showing the 7 + D are going backwards. I asked you to drop this and you've developed it. Can you please work on the logo's with the Calendar like I asked? Rotate the Calendar, integrate it the to 7, alter the calendar & text colours, see if they can be SUBTLY unified under a COLOUR COMPLIMENTING SCHEME.
#7Graph - Thanks for the idea's but I don't get them, also they look a little too basic. Also aren't using the colours we want. There's also no impacting emphasis on "TIME" which is a requirement.
#Moltech - Read the requirements and the comments on your original design #6 you've gone backwards also. No emphasis on TIME at all and the icon is repeating the "7" also the colours in #47 clash and #48 is basic with nothing that impresses me.
#PgarbzKulet - I actually like this design it's similar to a previous design we had by Justicia. The Icon still doesn't resemble time if it's supposed to be a calendar it's too abstract and I don't recognise it. If it's an icon can it be made to represent speed and can you also make it not the focal point until it really says "7 DAY SALES SYSTEM" at the moment it's just a cool looking square with rounded edges.
I get the Calendar is supposed to be the 7. But it's not working. It doesn't look like a 7 until you examine it (It took me a few glances to notice it) and it's repeating the same double 7 design that's been rejected a few times.
I like the idea though and I'm hoping you can make it fit somehow!
get rid of the bar = Sales System in the bar. Make the text coloured same as the clock segment. Remove the bar completely.
I'm not a fan of the font yuo've used either I used one for a company called UnicomGroup.co.uk based in the UK 5-6 years ago.
Your going to need to strip this right down and think (WEB 2.0, 2 / 3 colour (MAX) Shine gradients, unified colour, meaningful icon, modern font, aligned and uniform. That's to get close to a 4 / 5.
Not really a fan of this, the logo's are a nice touch but they don't fit the design.
Almost looks like a bad lexus rip off with RoboCop text. The colours way off too.
It looks better against the blue background but the huge meaningless Circle with cut out abstract 7 is unrecognisable.
Maybe if the circle looked more like a clock and the 7 more like the hands then it would be better but as it stands it's over designed and resembles a jumble of elements.
I'm surprised at this entry given your portfolio! Your other designs are great. I love the Peace Treaties, Waves and Happy Life... Where's the quality level gone?
I know you can do better! Make the Circle align to the text, get rid of the bar, tone down the many gradients, use the right colors and make the 7 in the icon look more like a clock and I think you be at the 4 - 5 out of 5 mark and a contender for the prize.
> Rotate the Calendar it's hanging from the ceiling ;)
> The colours still putting me off...Is that the hex code we gave? If so, try the light blue and / or other colours?
> Try integrating the 7 into the image somehow? I like what you did with the previous design integrating the 7 and D but it didn't gel with me. (Make this a new draft)...
#27 remove the -- around the sales system, there's no need for them and they make the text smaller. Better to keep the text as readable / usable as possible.
VERY NICE IMPROVEMENTS!!! Thank you very much for giving us alternative designs to equal Sumit128. We thought it was a one horse race there for a while!
> We like the shiny button. So can you make the calendar shinier?
> Make the rings on the calender a little more real...I guess is the best way to describe it.
> "Sales System" looks a little off center or lost. Can we see this Justified and aligned left or right?
> Can we see variations of this design with the same font / colour as you've done here. But we love the text from #18 and #19 too. So maybe slight variations with the calendar replacing the button in #18 and #19.
> I think the button icon with the "7" makes the 7 look over used. Maybe if you removed it from the text and just used the 7 in the icon it would look better?
> The text in the days / sales system might look better Justified?
> Also try without the 7 in the text in it but I like the Dark Text here. So can we see variations of the button with the dark text.
#Octopus #24
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I like your wording / fonts but the emblem / design isn't right, the blue / black is cool but it's flooding the design.
#lakshmiks #9 and #10
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Your going to seriously need to up your game to win, we like the web 2.0 feel and design. Your designs feel a little dated although we liked the slight emphasis of time. Although you'll need to raise your bar to sumit128's level!
#danjamespotter #7
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You are in literally because I'm moderately amused by your calendar. But the text is way out. Your design isn't gelling.
I like this design also, it's very facebook! Which we like, but a little too facebook and doesn't really again signify time or "7 days..." Can you look at the URL also and consider adding some Time elements into the design.
Additional words to help you:
Quick, Days, One Week.
Facebook Hex Codes:
#3B5998 - Dark Blue #627AAD - Light Blue
#D0E3BA - Light Green
#AE4743 - Light Red
#FCAF5C - Light Orange
#CA5C18 - Dark Orange
Would be nice to have a feel like Facebook Designed it...
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Porteur du Projet
Those entering late please study the BRIEF and these comments, there's no point in entering unless your:
1/ Going to understand our requirements
2/ Going to work from the idea's we've developed with designers so far
3/ Going to come up with unique twist's on the developing themes, using the requirements.
#Sumit128 - We love your designs, can you please work a little on changing the colour of the CALENDAR in #21 #31 #32 - Please use the colours you've used in the other design with the button. Also the text "SALES SYSTEM" under the "7 DAY" can you try that Justified please. (i.e. Streched to fit the "7Day").
# Octopus - Your designs showing the 7 + D are going backwards. I asked you to drop this and you've developed it. Can you please work on the logo's with the Calendar like I asked? Rotate the Calendar, integrate it the to 7, alter the calendar & text colours, see if they can be SUBTLY unified under a COLOUR COMPLIMENTING SCHEME.
#7Graph - Thanks for the idea's but I don't get them, also they look a little too basic. Also aren't using the colours we want. There's also no impacting emphasis on "TIME" which is a requirement.
#Moltech - Read the requirements and the comments on your original design #6 you've gone backwards also. No emphasis on TIME at all and the icon is repeating the "7" also the colours in #47 clash and #48 is basic with nothing that impresses me.
#PgarbzKulet - I actually like this design it's similar to a previous design we had by Justicia. The Icon still doesn't resemble time if it's supposed to be a calendar it's too abstract and I don't recognise it. If it's an icon can it be made to represent speed and can you also make it not the focal point until it really says "7 DAY SALES SYSTEM" at the moment it's just a cool looking square with rounded edges.
Cheers
Porteur du Projet
I get the Calendar is supposed to be the 7. But it's not working. It doesn't look like a 7 until you examine it (It took me a few glances to notice it) and it's repeating the same double 7 design that's been rejected a few times.
I like the idea though and I'm hoping you can make it fit somehow!
Porteur du Projet
get rid of the bar = Sales System in the bar. Make the text coloured same as the clock segment. Remove the bar completely.
I'm not a fan of the font yuo've used either I used one for a company called UnicomGroup.co.uk based in the UK 5-6 years ago.
Your going to need to strip this right down and think (WEB 2.0, 2 / 3 colour (MAX) Shine gradients, unified colour, meaningful icon, modern font, aligned and uniform. That's to get close to a 4 / 5.
Porteur du Projet
Not really a fan of this, the logo's are a nice touch but they don't fit the design.
Almost looks like a bad lexus rip off with RoboCop text. The colours way off too.
It looks better against the blue background but the huge meaningless Circle with cut out abstract 7 is unrecognisable.
Maybe if the circle looked more like a clock and the 7 more like the hands then it would be better but as it stands it's over designed and resembles a jumble of elements.
I'm surprised at this entry given your portfolio! Your other designs are great. I love the Peace Treaties, Waves and Happy Life... Where's the quality level gone?
I know you can do better! Make the Circle align to the text, get rid of the bar, tone down the many gradients, use the right colors and make the 7 in the icon look more like a clock and I think you be at the 4 - 5 out of 5 mark and a contender for the prize.
As its stands, I dislike this design...
Porteur du Projet
> Rotate the Calendar it's hanging from the ceiling ;)
> The colours still putting me off...Is that the hex code we gave? If so, try the light blue and / or other colours?
> Try integrating the 7 into the image somehow? I like what you did with the previous design integrating the 7 and D but it didn't gel with me. (Make this a new draft)...
#27 remove the -- around the sales system, there's no need for them and they make the text smaller. Better to keep the text as readable / usable as possible.
VERY NICE IMPROVEMENTS!!! Thank you very much for giving us alternative designs to equal Sumit128. We thought it was a one horse race there for a while!
Porteur du Projet
#sumit128 #18 #19 and #21
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WOW!!! We love these designs. You are clearly understanding the brief and applying some great talent to the designs.
#21
Almost perfect!
> We like the shiny button. So can you make the calendar shinier?
> Make the rings on the calender a little more real...I guess is the best way to describe it.
> "Sales System" looks a little off center or lost. Can we see this Justified and aligned left or right?
> Can we see variations of this design with the same font / colour as you've done here. But we love the text from #18 and #19 too. So maybe slight variations with the calendar replacing the button in #18 and #19.
#18 and #19
> I think the button icon with the "7" makes the 7 look over used. Maybe if you removed it from the text and just used the 7 in the icon it would look better?
> The text in the days / sales system might look better Justified?
> Can we see a green, orange & red button?
#18
> Also try without the 7 in the text in it but I like the Dark Text here. So can we see variations of the button with the dark text.
#Octopus #24
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I like your wording / fonts but the emblem / design isn't right, the blue / black is cool but it's flooding the design.
#lakshmiks #9 and #10
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Your going to seriously need to up your game to win, we like the web 2.0 feel and design. Your designs feel a little dated although we liked the slight emphasis of time. Although you'll need to raise your bar to sumit128's level!
#danjamespotter #7
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You are in literally because I'm moderately amused by your calendar. But the text is way out. Your design isn't gelling.
Porteur du Projet
All your efforts are appreciated!
molteck#6
Your design is great, however the colours are out. Also can you give some emphasis of time...the idea is that 7 days is a short period of time...
We had the idea of a calendar image being used in the logo at first.
Similar to this logo in this link:
http://newwineharvest.net/icallogo.png
lakshmiks#5
I like this design also, it's very facebook! Which we like, but a little too facebook and doesn't really again signify time or "7 days..." Can you look at the URL also and consider adding some Time elements into the design.
Additional words to help you:
Quick, Days, One Week.
Facebook Hex Codes:
#3B5998 - Dark Blue
#627AAD - Light Blue
#D0E3BA - Light Green
#AE4743 - Light Red
#FCAF5C - Light Orange
#CA5C18 - Dark Orange
Would be nice to have a feel like Facebook Designed it...
Facebook Icons:
http://static.ak.fbcdn.net/rsrc.php/v1/yl/r/-Pln0ov8g1Y.png
THANK YOU
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BUT PLEASE KEEP THE IDEAS COMING IN! WE ARE LIABLE TO CHANGE OUR MINDS IF YOUR IDEA IS BETTER THAN OURS!!!
Porteur du Projet
preferably done in illustrator
vector image
transparent background
Thanks