Could you please make the "Premium" and "Textiles" begin with a capital letter.
Consider the positioning of the lettering (align the bottom of the lettering with the bottom of the graphic, or the top of the capital letteres with the middle of the graphic; whichever leads the eye best ?)
Show me an option with the above changes, and both with and without the vertical line. Not sure it's necessary on this design (?).
On the "IM" comment, I meant could you make the whole graphic in that area slightly smaller, not just the lettering. The proportion was good before.Could you please set this bit back as before, just overall slightly smaller. Apologies for the confusion.
Could you make the green and brown colours a little more vivid and darker. Look at other designs on this element...
- Add the white flower from draft 22, but can you make this a little smaller e.g 2/3 of the size.
- Lose the other graphic above "textiles".
- Underline the "premium textiles" as draft 22. Not sure if this needs to be green or brown (?).
Prefer colours of 28 to 27. Could you please lose the bite from the "m". Can you consider:
- Physically seperate the "im" from the "premium textiles". Perhaps a vertical line similar to #1 ?
- Consider underlining the "premium textiles"
- Consider making the ".co.uk" less prominent. perhaps drop it below the line similar to #24 ?
All the above may not be applicable but I need to see how it looks please.
The designs where the "IM" is distinct and seperate to all other parts of the design will be the preferred ones. I may use this as a common theme across other projects, so need it to carry across e.g. it can't in itself carry a graphic which is unique to this one such as a cotton bud or a leaf.
Like the colours and the typeface. Graphic needs to be a little more simple. The "IM" needs to stand more distinct from the rest of the design as this could be used as a common theme across other enterprises. Also, The "IM" needs to be a more simple design please.
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Porteur du Projet
Like the graphic.
Could you please make the "Premium" and "Textiles" begin with a capital letter.
Consider the positioning of the lettering (align the bottom of the lettering with the bottom of the graphic, or the top of the capital letteres with the middle of the graphic; whichever leads the eye best ?)
Show me an option with the above changes, and both with and without the vertical line. Not sure it's necessary on this design (?).
Thanks.
Porteur du Projet
On the "IM" comment, I meant could you make the whole graphic in that area slightly smaller, not just the lettering. The proportion was good before.Could you please set this bit back as before, just overall slightly smaller. Apologies for the confusion.
Could you make the green and brown colours a little more vivid and darker. Look at other designs on this element...
Thanks.
Porteur du Projet
Could you please:
Make the flower slightly larger. It was too big before; I think it is too small now. Needs to be about halfway between the 2 sizes.
Move it back to the original position e.g. Coming from above the "P" in "Premium".
Show me options with the above changes 1. With the vertical line 2. Without the vertical line.
Thanks...
Porteur du Projet
Could you please:
- Add the white flower from draft 22, but can you make this a little smaller e.g 2/3 of the size.
- Lose the other graphic above "textiles".
- Underline the "premium textiles" as draft 22. Not sure if this needs to be green or brown (?).
Thanks.
Porteur du Projet
Could I see an option without the flower/leaf please ?
Thanks
Porteur du Projet
Prefer colours of 28 to 27. Could you please lose the bite from the "m". Can you consider:
- Physically seperate the "im" from the "premium textiles". Perhaps a vertical line similar to #1 ?
- Consider underlining the "premium textiles"
- Consider making the ".co.uk" less prominent. perhaps drop it below the line similar to #24 ?
All the above may not be applicable but I need to see how it looks please.
Thanks.
Porteur du Projet
The designs where the "IM" is distinct and seperate to all other parts of the design will be the preferred ones. I may use this as a common theme across other projects, so need it to carry across e.g. it can't in itself carry a graphic which is unique to this one such as a cotton bud or a leaf.
Porteur du Projet
More like it. Would like to see please:
An option using a cotton bud instead of the leaf.
Can you please extend the green banding to cover the whole logo on the one at the bottom.
Don't withdraw draft #18 though please as I do quite like it.
Thanks.
Porteur du Projet
Could you create some distinction/space between the IM and the rest of the logo as this needs to stand apart.
Quite like the leaf motif, but need something a little more relevant to the subject matter.
Like the typeface. Could you see if you can make the "IM" a little more interesting.
Porteur du Projet
Like the colours and the typeface. Graphic needs to be a little more simple. The "IM" needs to stand more distinct from the rest of the design as this could be used as a common theme across other enterprises. Also, The "IM" needs to be a more simple design please.
Porteur du Projet
Quite like the "simple" design.
The "IM" needs to be more distinct from the "Premium Textiles".
No need to show the .co.uk or at least should be a less distinctive part of the design as draft #2.
Colours - don't mind some colour in the graphic. Think more of the greens and browns for the lettering.
Porteur du Projet
On the second design down, like the idea. Can you try:
The "IM" part a little smaller. The cotton bud a little bigger e.g. both approximately the same size.
The weight/width of the brown semi-circlular lines around the "IM" the same as the dividing line. I think they are a little heavy.
The text "IM" - can you make this the same height/weight as the word "Premium". Quite like the distinctive typeface.
Each side of the logo a little closer to the dividing line.
Thanks.