i like the way #24 has included the mobile app and think that this format works as opposed to in #18 (if have understood correctly and the icon in the bottom right is an app icon).
#24 - the frame in the character and the background colour is really good and clear. however the tagline is missing and the font appears to be out of sync. i like the colours and the gradient however am worried it is too heavy - how would this translate to print on for example a 100g pure white cartridge?
#18 has an idea that we like ie.person holding a bomb. frame and background placement would be better with that of #24 for reasons detailed above. also colour and font not quite right and the design is alittle basic.
#15 - think the large B looks out of place and think the font for the tagline is not right but i really like the idea.
general note for an alternative concept would be a person coming out of a computer screen possibly leaning to write and the text below. the idea is that all communication, expressions and views is via digital media.
thanks again for all designs so far and look forward to finalising this tomorrow.
4 Commentaire récents
^_^
Porteur du Projet
i like the way #24 has included the mobile app and think that this format works as opposed to in #18 (if have understood correctly and the icon in the bottom right is an app icon).
#24 - the frame in the character and the background colour is really good and clear. however the tagline is missing and the font appears to be out of sync. i like the colours and the gradient however am worried it is too heavy - how would this translate to print on for example a 100g pure white cartridge?
#18 has an idea that we like ie.person holding a bomb. frame and background placement would be better with that of #24 for reasons detailed above. also colour and font not quite right and the design is alittle basic.
#15 - think the large B looks out of place and think the font for the tagline is not right but i really like the idea.
#10 the character is too young and needs framing.
general note for an alternative concept would be a person coming out of a computer screen possibly leaning to write and the text below. the idea is that all communication, expressions and views is via digital media.
thanks again for all designs so far and look forward to finalising this tomorrow.
Shauna
Any feedbacks
Diwakar