smartinfo.. why are your designs similar to priyo? I expect different designs from different designers. Hence it's difficult for me to comment on yours cause it's not your design.
1. I like #11 - and the use of grey/white fill for the brochure. Can you make the title fonts look a bit more cleaner? It's a bit hard to read.
2. Also, I like how you do the angled photo-strip in #5 - could you incorporate that into #11? And have more pics in brochure - more people, to induce a 'warmer' feel to the brochure
3. I prefer the female models used in #7 and #2.
4. RM50 coupon is good - cud you have like a cut-out design (dotted lines with scissor icon) to better indicate that it's a voucher? Maybe even change the colour for that part.
5. Poster #10 needs some changes:
- the same changes to fonts, model, etc. as in the flyer
- Include also contact details - website, tel no.
- have the dailymuscle transformation camp logo blend in more seamlessly (no white border)
- I like how #9 has the key points very large, and in point form (with check mark)
#1, #2 - will this brochure be A6 when folded into 3? Looks like an A4 trifold to me. Also, please include a section in the end where people can 'cut-out' a coupon to claim their RM50 off. This should look like a real coupon, and the idea is for them to cut it out and redeem.
The coupon should also have some fine print:
1. The use of this coupon is limited to one individual only.
2. This coupon is valid for first-time participants only.
3. Applicable for the Transformation Camp Monthly Workout program only.
4. Valid at all camp locations.
Hi, just to clarify... the brochure can be duofold, or trifold - whichever you think is more appropriate - but it needs to be an A6 size when folded. The reason for this is that I want something that is uncommon - hence something a little smaller, that isn't like every other brochure out there.
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I just realised there's no major headline for people to see what it is from a distance...
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2. Also, I like how you do the angled photo-strip in #5 - could you incorporate that into #11? And have more pics in brochure - more people, to induce a 'warmer' feel to the brochure
3. I prefer the female models used in #7 and #2.
4. RM50 coupon is good - cud you have like a cut-out design (dotted lines with scissor icon) to better indicate that it's a voucher? Maybe even change the colour for that part.
5. Poster #10 needs some changes:
- the same changes to fonts, model, etc. as in the flyer
- Include also contact details - website, tel no.
- have the dailymuscle transformation camp logo blend in more seamlessly (no white border)
- I like how #9 has the key points very large, and in point form (with check mark)
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The coupon should also have some fine print:
1. The use of this coupon is limited to one individual only.
2. This coupon is valid for first-time participants only.
3. Applicable for the Transformation Camp Monthly Workout program only.
4. Valid at all camp locations.
Valid till: _____________ (leave blank)
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Also, the size of the flyer (poster) is A3.