I realize this may be a bit picky so give me some of your thoughts. I like the swirly smoke, can you play that up?
#3 - I like where this is going but the fonts look stretched. I don't like the 3 prong fork
#4 - Again, try removing fork and is there a way to emphasize "smoke" more than "second"? I like what I see in your portfolio, can you bring some other concepts out. Feel free to drop that orange color, just keep the colors subdued/vintage, etc.
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I realize this may be a bit picky so give me some of your thoughts. I like the swirly smoke, can you play that up?
#3 - I like where this is going but the fonts look stretched. I don't like the 3 prong fork
#4 - Again, try removing fork and is there a way to emphasize "smoke" more than "second"? I like what I see in your portfolio, can you bring some other concepts out. Feel free to drop that orange color, just keep the colors subdued/vintage, etc.
Thank you to both of you.