#14
I'm liking this design. I would like to see some color changes that gives it a bolder look. Some red, gold,blue, black. The current colors are nice but it just looks to soft.
Coming along. I think there is too much emphasis on Boomer. One suggestion is to remove "Boomer" and move up the tag line. Secondly, replace 'Boomer" with "Todd Johnson".
Getting closer! Still need the Broker to the boomer to play a more prominent role. Darker colors perhaps. How about more like a banner ad with broker to the "insert image"?
I love the incorporation of the house image into the boomer! Overall it looks good but I think it has to much focus on baby boomer and not enough on broker to the boomers. Maybe even drop the baby and just go with boomer some how. Broker to the boomer needs to be more prominent but great first start.
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Porteur du Projet
I'm liking this design. I would like to see some color changes that gives it a bolder look. Some red, gold,blue, black. The current colors are nice but it just looks to soft.
Porteur du Projet
Coming along. I think there is too much emphasis on Boomer. One suggestion is to remove "Boomer" and move up the tag line. Secondly, replace 'Boomer" with "Todd Johnson".
Porteur du Projet
Getting closer! Still need the Broker to the boomer to play a more prominent role. Darker colors perhaps. How about more like a banner ad with broker to the "insert image"?
Porteur du Projet
I love the incorporation of the house image into the boomer! Overall it looks good but I think it has to much focus on baby boomer and not enough on broker to the boomers. Maybe even drop the baby and just go with boomer some how. Broker to the boomer needs to be more prominent but great first start.