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I'll be presenting the final drafts to my manager for approval. Could we make it a bit bigger?
Porteur du Projet
Could you shave off a couple pixels on the right side of "A" on #21 to make the width of the right stroke on the letter the same as on the left side of the letter, and then upload both the comparison that you've been presenting up until now, and also a new-one-only draft?
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Draft 18 appears wavy, as opposed to the very clear cut look we're trying to accomplish. I appreciate the attempt at re-innovation through gradient, but let's keep it to a straightforward single color... I'm pretty sure I can manage a gradient in AI if we later choose to use it.
I prefer Draft 14 to Draft 15. Let's also make the curve of the body of the "S" sharper, as in the original.
& it can be exported with transparent or any other color background in PNG, JPG, TIFF etc formats.
By the way I've added a gradient too.
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Assuming that "S" begins at the top right and ends at the bottom left, let's open up the space between the beginning of the letter and its body to match the space between the end of the letter and the body. Also, let's make both curves on the inside of the "S" slightly more squared off and equal in depth, as in the original.
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Re: Draft 8,
The "S" is a few pixels away from the baseline established between the "A" and the "H."
Maybe it's simply the resolution of the thumb, but I'm picking up a little orange in the places where manipulation occurred. Is there any way to restrict the canvas to a single color?
I'd prefer it if the angle in the middle of the "S" were preserved as in the original, if the two holes in the upper and lower part of the "S" were more clear cut, as in the original, if the ends of the "S" extended closer to the body of the "S," as in the original, and if the width of the letter were consistent all throughout its body.
Also, let's shave a little bit off the right side of the new "A" and add a hair to the left side, middle stroke, and the entire logo, ensuring that every stroke throughout both the logo and the "A," "S," and "H" is a consistent width.
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Also, if you could rotate the smoke coming from the cigarette a bit more clockwise in order to make an equidistant emission from the tobacco, and bring it a bit more centered over the tobacco, that'd be great. Please refer to the original in making the tobacco the exact width as the cigarette, particularly on the bottom.
Porteur du Projet
My eye keeps wandering to the "S." It feels almost too stunted now.
You will recieve a .ai file format with lots of other formats from MB. But the .ai format can be scaled to any size without losing any quality. Even to the size of a building or a bus.
I will upload a few more drafts as I have just realised the A is still at a funny slant.
Kind regards
Dave
Porteur du Projet
I think the graphic part was updated well. One of the issues we have with the text itself is that the "S" is cut off at the top "see the bottom of the "S" for reference, and the "H" is slanted differently than the "A" and the "S".
As the updated logo is to be used on the website, stationery, etc, the largest possible resolution with a transparent background (if that's possible through MycroBurst) is preferable.
Feel free to alter the font slightly in order to improve the look. I find that the text sometimes looks like it came in contact with a little bit of water on paper, and thereby became slightly distorted.