8 décembre 2011 07:36 AircraftEval Porteur du Projet
Great job everyone, thank you so much for the hard work. It was a tough decision.
7 décembre 2011 13:49 AircraftEval Porteur du Projet
#18 - The brochure, on the back, move the contact information down towards the bottom and leave the logo in the middle where it is.
On the Cover of the brochure and the front of the post card, change the text 'Certified to Appraise Single and Multi-Engine Airplanes and Helicopters' to the same font as the 'www.AircraftEval.com' down below. (So it's not all caps)
6 décembre 2011 12:39 AircraftEval Porteur du Projet
#16 - The back of the postcard(the side without the stamp) add in 'Certified Aircraft Appraiser' centered over top of the 'Appraisal Process' and 'Mission Statement:' Try using a larger red color font. On the front of the postcard(the side with the stamp) remove the photo of the red helicopter and replace it with a blue helicopter(if you can find one) I don't want to have the helicopter on there twice and the blue will help to balance out the design.
In the brochure:
On the back of the brochure (Logo and contact info): Remove the text 'Contact Information:' then move the contact information down towards the bottom. Leave the logo in the middle where it is. Can you adjust the blue background gradient on the light side so the logo doesn't get lost. (Make the light blue slightly lighter) That way the center of the logo is not lost to the rest of the blue area.
Remove the logo above 'Home Airports' then move the 'Home Airports' up to the same height as the 'Appraisal Process on the other side. Add in additional space between all of the airports so they are not clumped together.
Under the 'Appraisal Process:' the bold text looks good, but the actual numbers are differently spaced from the 'Step' text. This is probably due to the text taking up the whole line (I forget the name of that term). try changing it to a left align, it will leave some gaps on the right but it will make all of the numbers line up.
6 décembre 2011 08:26 AircraftEval Porteur du Projet
#15 - The changes you made to the brochure look good, I do have a few more changes to make:
Above the picture to the helicopter remove the logo and put in the text "Certified to appraise Single and Multi-Engine Airplanes and Helicopters"
On the front of the brochure (image with the jet) move the image down to the bottom of the page (remove the blue line at the bottom), to resemble the alignment of the helicopters image.
With the list of the 'Home Airports' the bullet points all line up but the name of the airports do not make a straight line when looking down the list.
The appraisal process list, please change the 'Step 1, Step 2, Step 3, Step 4, Step 5, Step 6 and Step 7' to bold text.
6 décembre 2011 08:16 AircraftEval Porteur du Projet
#14 - The design looks good but I would like to change some text around. On the back of the postcard, remove the appraisal process but keep the logo. Below the logo put the contact information from the front.
On the front remove the logo on the right side and move the mission statement over to that side. Then in the blue area above the helicopter, use that are for the 'Appraisal Process'
The layout/design looks good but I don't like the front of the post card with the two pictures and the 'hard' line between the two. On the back you have a great flowing transition between the two pictures and i would like the same type of transition on the front.
5 décembre 2011 14:55 AircraftEval Porteur du Projet
#12 - Remove the picture of the helicopter and the 'Love to Fly' then add in the text: "Certified to appraise Single and Multi-Engine Airplanes and Helicopters" Depending on how this looks, you could try swapping the location of the text with the logo.
5 décembre 2011 14:51 AircraftEval Porteur du Projet
#11 - Looks good - Only a few changes.
Inside Fold - change the 'Step #' to bold or underlined to highlight the steps.
Back - Remove the red 'Ryan Dale' but leave the space below the logo and the address. Also after my phone number remove the second name the one '(Ryan)'.
Front - change the 'Single Engine', 'Multi-Engine', 'Helicopters' to: "Certified to appraise Single and Multi-Engine Airplanes and Helicopters"
Inside2 - remove the 'OFFERING NOW' line.
5 décembre 2011 12:30 AircraftEval Porteur du Projet
#10 - I like the pictures, for some reason they are very blurry or pixilated. The text and the other images look good.
For the back of the design, remove the text on the 'Ryan Dale' line - keep the space to allow a space between 'Contact Information:' and the next line of 'Aircraft Evaluators'
5 décembre 2011 09:23 AircraftEval Porteur du Projet
#9 - The brochure looks great - the picture on the cover needs to change because it's not me on there and unfortunately I don't have any comparable picture to submit. I like the personal touch it provides however I don't want to confuse my clients into thinking that that is me on the front.
Cant wait to see the inside.
4 décembre 2011 16:29 AircraftEval Porteur du Projet
#8 - I really like this design, the colors and the layout look great! I don't like the picture with the three people, change it out with a picture of another propeller type of plane or even a helicopter.
The back of the brochure and the front cover look great.
The fold where the 'Home Airports' are located - the bullet points are separated too far from the text - move the bullet points in closer to the text. The image below is backwards (note the name/number on the side) either change it around or swap it out with another. I really like the red wave strip down at the bottom.
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Porteur du Projet
Porteur du Projet
On the Cover of the brochure and the front of the post card, change the text 'Certified to Appraise Single and Multi-Engine Airplanes and Helicopters' to the same font as the 'www.AircraftEval.com' down below. (So it's not all caps)
I would appreciate your feedback on my designs.
Thank You
XtremeCreative2
Porteur du Projet
In the brochure:
On the back of the brochure (Logo and contact info): Remove the text 'Contact Information:' then move the contact information down towards the bottom. Leave the logo in the middle where it is. Can you adjust the blue background gradient on the light side so the logo doesn't get lost. (Make the light blue slightly lighter) That way the center of the logo is not lost to the rest of the blue area.
Remove the logo above 'Home Airports' then move the 'Home Airports' up to the same height as the 'Appraisal Process on the other side. Add in additional space between all of the airports so they are not clumped together.
Under the 'Appraisal Process:' the bold text looks good, but the actual numbers are differently spaced from the 'Step' text. This is probably due to the text taking up the whole line (I forget the name of that term). try changing it to a left align, it will leave some gaps on the right but it will make all of the numbers line up.
Keep up the great work.
Employé(e)
-Liz
Porteur du Projet
Above the picture to the helicopter remove the logo and put in the text "Certified to appraise Single and Multi-Engine Airplanes and Helicopters"
On the front of the brochure (image with the jet) move the image down to the bottom of the page (remove the blue line at the bottom), to resemble the alignment of the helicopters image.
With the list of the 'Home Airports' the bullet points all line up but the name of the airports do not make a straight line when looking down the list.
The appraisal process list, please change the 'Step 1, Step 2, Step 3, Step 4, Step 5, Step 6 and Step 7' to bold text.
Porteur du Projet
On the front remove the logo on the right side and move the mission statement over to that side. Then in the blue area above the helicopter, use that are for the 'Appraisal Process'
The layout/design looks good but I don't like the front of the post card with the two pictures and the 'hard' line between the two. On the back you have a great flowing transition between the two pictures and i would like the same type of transition on the front.
Porteur du Projet
Porteur du Projet
Inside Fold - change the 'Step #' to bold or underlined to highlight the steps.
Back - Remove the red 'Ryan Dale' but leave the space below the logo and the address. Also after my phone number remove the second name the one '(Ryan)'.
Front - change the 'Single Engine', 'Multi-Engine', 'Helicopters' to: "Certified to appraise Single and Multi-Engine Airplanes and Helicopters"
Inside2 - remove the 'OFFERING NOW' line.
Porteur du Projet
For the back of the design, remove the text on the 'Ryan Dale' line - keep the space to allow a space between 'Contact Information:' and the next line of 'Aircraft Evaluators'
Porteur du Projet
Cant wait to see the inside.
Porteur du Projet
The back of the brochure and the front cover look great.
The fold where the 'Home Airports' are located - the bullet points are separated too far from the text - move the bullet points in closer to the text. The image below is backwards (note the name/number on the side) either change it around or swap it out with another. I really like the red wave strip down at the bottom.
Employé(e)
-Liz