#91: also looks great on the light background. Please try with the strip taken out of "10th." I like these two fonts together.
Also, what if "avenue district" was vertically centered in the notch on the right side of the "t" in "10th"? does that make sense? the cross bar on top, the smaller "tail" on the bottom right of the "t"...the space between them might be a good place to vertically center "avenue district." A bit picky, I know, but that might be the place to put it. It looks like you're experimenting with that placement between #90 and #91, and maybe that's the place for it?
sorry, didn't see your comment. #89: I like. I'm curious a strip taken out of "10th" with the text inside, like your earlier options with this new font. It looks really good on black.
#87 and #88: I'm worried about legibility on these; the text is hard to read at a smaller size. The "10th" and "avenue district" don't feel quite like a singular unit, yet (something you managed to do really well in your other designs).
#86. Awesome. Really like it. Could we also see it with "Avenue District" just a touch to the right? right now the "1" feels off by itself a little, so I'm hoping that increasing the space between "0" and "ave District" will help. Really great work, though.
#77: I think I like #64 more. In #64, I really like the "10" in terms of shape, but the other text seems to overpower it. Maybe "avenue district" is smaller in #64? In terms of fonts, I like something more along the lines of #64 than #77.
#74: Still not quite there. I think what I mean by "understated" is that these fonts have so far been more stylized. Something more straightforward might work better. Also, if the "10" is thinner, I think it works better; this allows for less extra space within the "0". Thanks for your work!
#73: great call on the treatment of the "I"s. Like the alignment of "th." what if the orange underneath the "th" aligned with the top of "District" and we also gave some more breathing room between the "th" and the orange above it? Would that work?
#72: great treatment! way to achieve classy and friendly.
#68: could we continue to see more color options? I think we're getting close. I'm going to let you choose some that you think best, but what I'm going for here is something that feels less cartoony in terms of color; maybe some subdued colors? Black and one other color? gray and one other color? Maybe some gentle color fades? I'll let you do your job, but those are some suggestions.
#65: Still feels like the "10th" is overpowered, though, and bringing the 1 and 0 together makes it a bit harder to immediately read the "10".
#66: definitely like this. very classy and to the point.
#63: great! would it work to align the "th" with some of the other text? Might help tighten it up just that extra bit. Maybe it rests on the same imaginary line as "Avenue"? overall, though, I like it.
#61: Great start!
The "avenue district" portion is a bit overpowering right now; I think I'd like 10th to have a bit more clout. Maybe this is a font change, a color change, etc., etc.? There are several different ways of approaching that, so I won't dictate how exactly you do so. Also, could we see "District" in all caps?
Draft #21: Where the line almost meets the "0", can it contour the outside of the "0" a bit better? right now the white space between these two elements is uneven. Could I also see some more subtle color options and maybe a new font option as well? Maybe a typeface that's less tech feeling? I do like this general concept, though.
#48: could we try the "10" and "District" from #43 with the "Avenue" from #48 that's more of a charcoal? That might do the trick. I really like the treatment and color of "10" in #43.
Speaking of which...I did notice one small thing. I like the lines that help outline the "10" in #43, the ones that are below the "10." The line that's below the top left of the "1": can this be given some more white space between it and the "1"? I'm worried it might not be as dynamic as the lines at the base of the "10." Also, in a separate option, could you see what you think about making these lines black or charcoal or another color? That might help the "10" get some more weight. If you try that color change and don't think it worth showing, though, no worries at all. Thanks for your work!
#47: still not quite there. I'm trying to think of good ways to describe what I'm looking for... These options are going more pastel, and I'm thinking things that are established and professional and classy. Which doesn't rule out colors completely. Maybe that blue paired with a warm gray or a tan or brown? I think the overall color palette I'm looking for is a bit richer. Hopefully I'm describing this well?
draft #43: nice. I like the richer orange also. Right now, "Avenue" stands out to me more than "10th," and I think "10th" might need to carry some more weight. It might be as simple as changing what color is used where? This is a good option, though.
Draft #42: I like having "TEN" and "TH" in different colors. Good call. Can you remove the outlines around each one?
Color-wise, we're not quite there yet. I don't have a specific color in mind, but I'm thinking of colors that aren't as cartoony and playful and are more distinguished, subtle, and classy. I hope that helps.
The blue in the top left option is a start, maybe paired with a different color than the bright orange?
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Also, what if "avenue district" was vertically centered in the notch on the right side of the "t" in "10th"? does that make sense? the cross bar on top, the smaller "tail" on the bottom right of the "t"...the space between them might be a good place to vertically center "avenue district." A bit picky, I know, but that might be the place to put it. It looks like you're experimenting with that placement between #90 and #91, and maybe that's the place for it?
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#73: great call on the treatment of the "I"s. Like the alignment of "th." what if the orange underneath the "th" aligned with the top of "District" and we also gave some more breathing room between the "th" and the orange above it? Would that work?
#72: great treatment! way to achieve classy and friendly.
#71: great!
#68: could we continue to see more color options? I think we're getting close. I'm going to let you choose some that you think best, but what I'm going for here is something that feels less cartoony in terms of color; maybe some subdued colors? Black and one other color? gray and one other color? Maybe some gentle color fades? I'll let you do your job, but those are some suggestions.
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#65: Still feels like the "10th" is overpowered, though, and bringing the 1 and 0 together makes it a bit harder to immediately read the "10".
#66: definitely like this. very classy and to the point.
#63: great! would it work to align the "th" with some of the other text? Might help tighten it up just that extra bit. Maybe it rests on the same imaginary line as "Avenue"? overall, though, I like it.
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The "avenue district" portion is a bit overpowering right now; I think I'd like 10th to have a bit more clout. Maybe this is a font change, a color change, etc., etc.? There are several different ways of approaching that, so I won't dictate how exactly you do so. Also, could we see "District" in all caps?
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#60: I like the overall concept, but I'm not feeling these fonts as much. Something more understated, maybe?
#57: gorgeous work. Could we also see an option where "10th" is by itself on the left and "avenue" is stacked on top of "district" on the right?
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There are some options from last week that are stellar, but we want to add a few more to the pot when we make our decision.
thanks, I'll keep trying to understand your wishes
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Speaking of which...I did notice one small thing. I like the lines that help outline the "10" in #43, the ones that are below the "10." The line that's below the top left of the "1": can this be given some more white space between it and the "1"? I'm worried it might not be as dynamic as the lines at the base of the "10." Also, in a separate option, could you see what you think about making these lines black or charcoal or another color? That might help the "10" get some more weight. If you try that color change and don't think it worth showing, though, no worries at all. Thanks for your work!
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how about this? #47
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Color-wise, we're not quite there yet. I don't have a specific color in mind, but I'm thinking of colors that aren't as cartoony and playful and are more distinguished, subtle, and classy. I hope that helps.
The blue in the top left option is a start, maybe paired with a different color than the bright orange?
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ok, no probs. thanks again :)