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Logo design for Half Price Staff

Half Price Staff


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A Logo, Monogram, or Icon | Created by HalfPriceStaff

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  • January 24, 2011 7:15 PM HalfPriceStaff
    Project Holder

    #78 yeah those faces look better thanks

  • January 24, 2011 8:45 AM HalfPriceStaff
    Project Holder

    #59 2 things - after asking some friends to look at the design, they asked if we could change the faces so the 'smile' looked less over the top. Maybe by placing a different shadow on the faces.
    Also can we see the design with the neckties straight?
    thanks

  • January 24, 2011 8:42 AM HalfPriceStaff
    Project Holder

    #72 - like your 'people' in this design the best so far. The design however looks a bit 'classroom' like - could it be made a bit smaller or closer to look less like that?

  • January 21, 2011 12:36 AM HalfPriceStaff
    Project Holder

    #58 I think with the neck ties, the little star on the shoulder would need to be taken off.

  • January 21, 2011 12:11 AM HalfPriceStaff
    Project Holder

    #50 thanks for this version - I do think I prefer the lettering in your #5 but good to be able to see both.

  • January 21, 2011 12:08 AM HalfPriceStaff
    Project Holder

    #49 I like the Neck tie and the black and white design. The way the words stack works well too. Thanks for this design.

  • January 21, 2011 12:04 AM HalfPriceStaff
    Project Holder

    #53 #54 I like the spacing in the words that you have here. Could you take out the line through the middle as I think it will look better with this design.

    I also like the cursor arrow that you have in #47. Not sure how or if it would work but is there a way you could incorporate the arrow into a #53 #54 type of design ?

  • January 20, 2011 5:53 PM HalfPriceStaff
    Project Holder

    #41 better concept here - I like your spacing of the people. Could you make the written part a thin stripe that cuts goes through the middle rather than making the whole top half lighter?

  • January 20, 2011 5:48 PM HalfPriceStaff
    Project Holder

    #37 yeah I am liking the symbol in the front better. This symbol isn't really working. Not sure why.

    I do like how the different shades of blue look in the written part.

  • January 20, 2011 5:35 PM HalfPriceStaff
    Project Holder

    #20 #23 #24 My eye keeps getting drawn to your design on the page. It is clean and simple and i like how you have incorporated the 1/2. The trouble we have is that our web address will be the written word 'half' and not '1/2'.

    Is there some way you can have the 1/2 incorported while having the word 'half' in there. Can you do this somehow while keeping the effect of your simplicity?

  • January 20, 2011 5:26 PM HalfPriceStaff
    Project Holder

    #26 - I like the boldness of the black and white. As said before the image does not work. But the base idea of the rest of the design is good.

  • January 20, 2011 5:25 PM HalfPriceStaff
    Project Holder

    #35 looks great. Thanks for making those changes.

  • January 20, 2011 5:20 PM HalfPriceStaff
    Project Holder

    #34 I like it with the symbol in front like you have here more than on top. Looks good.

  • January 20, 2011 5:19 PM HalfPriceStaff
    Project Holder

    #31 I like this one a lot better. I like the concept on halving the H. I think a different colour scheme could make this look even better.

  • January 20, 2011 5:16 PM HalfPriceStaff
    Project Holder

    #19 #21 #22 #28 - the image used doesn't really work for us. We are an office services company - so the 'construction' style doesn't say it.

  • January 20, 2011 5:10 PM HalfPriceStaff
    Project Holder

    #27 #29 #30 - they eyes on it in #29 really made it work for me. Really like it. I like the colour scheme you chose too. The way you did the word 'price' makes it not stand out too much from the other words. Nice.

  • January 20, 2011 3:39 PM zillustrations

    @ contest holder,
    sorry I didn't read your comments before.
    I will submit revisions based on comments soon.
    thanks

  • January 20, 2011 10:00 AM HalfPriceStaff
    Project Holder

    #15 #16 #17 thanks for showing me those changes. The design is an engaging one - but wont work for us on this project - a bit too 'busy' and complex for our needs with this project I think.

  • January 20, 2011 8:49 AM HalfPriceStaff
    Project Holder

    #14 I like your blue combo here more than the red ones.

  • January 20, 2011 8:48 AM HalfPriceStaff
    Project Holder

    # 11 and # 12 - looks nice and bold and I get the thoughts and messages that have gone into it ( eg. the camera as the connection - the bee hive pattern to show hardworking and co operation ). Thanks for coming from a different angle.

    It is probably a bit too 'busy' as it is. I am not sure how to alter it to keep the essence you have, to make it work. All I can offer would be 'simpler' and something to show friendliness/approachability. As many of our clients will not be highly tech savy, they will need the comfort of knowing we are people behind the technology.

    I do like your colour suggestions. I especially like the fade combo you have done on the word 'Price' in #11. If you could do something with that same combo on 'Half Price' together, I'd like to see it.

  • January 20, 2011 7:50 AM HalfPriceStaff
    Project Holder

    #9 and #10 - thanks for making the changes. I like the outside looking in person you have done. The design of number #10 's picture is more illustrative of what we do as an employer would normally have just one of their team members 'telecomuting' through our company. So one person on screen is better.

    They would however it would be one person on screen and more than one looking at it. Could you take the connecting swish off, and add a second person looking to the monitor?

    I also like the colour scheme you have put forward in #9 better.

    The writing will need to be all in the same colour and boldness, as we need to not have the emphasis on the word 'price'. This may mean having the first letter as a capital and the rest lower case. (You may have another Ideas about this). I have written more detail about this in other feedback notes if it is helpful).

    Another slight modification in #10 is that the stand of the monitor seems to match up to be the legs of the onscreen person and they kind of look like they are twisted backwards. Is there a way to change this, as I do like your monitor design.

  • January 20, 2011 6:21 AM HalfPriceStaff
    Project Holder

    # 1 , with the monitor in your design, could you take out the 'swoosh' ring around it ?

  • January 20, 2011 6:18 AM HalfPriceStaff
    Project Holder

    #8 definate move in the right direction. The 'picture' does portray the 'friendly / approachable image. I would say it is not quite so clear on the 'computer' - looks more 'robotic' than it does a 'person'.

    Thanks for the different colour. It is a nice combination too.

    I Think the writting may have to be in the same colour and the same font and boldness. It may require the writting to be each word having just the first letter in capitals (upper case) and the rest of each word in (lower case). Just so the "price' word is not over highlighted.

    Thanks again

  • January 20, 2011 4:13 AM HalfPriceStaff
    Project Holder

    re # 6 and # 7 . Thanks for submitting your designs. The designs are clean which I like, the symbol is a bit 'hard' I think as one of the things we need to communicate is 'personability' (friendliness/approachable).

    Also, the words 'Half Price' or even all the words 'Half Price Staff' need to be the same colour, for the correct emphasis.

    I like the colour scheme so far presented on all the entries - however the colours are open for you to choose (we have not selected a colour scheme). So if you have a different idea on colour then I would love to see that too.

  • January 20, 2011 2:58 AM HalfPriceStaff
    Project Holder

    re # 5 I like it - can think of no improvements to it. It is the best of the set so far.



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