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Phoenix Electronic Cigarettes


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A Logo, Monogram, or Icon | Created by LittleSpoon

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  • January 10, 2011 12:25 AM LittleSpoon
    Project Holder

    The size of the tongue is perfect but I wanted the same shape as draft#9. Can I see one version with the top beak slightly thicker where it connects to the face and the glow/gradient starting at the base directly above the E in Phoenix (going upwards). The other version with just the tongue changed. Thank you.

  • January 9, 2011 5:42 AM LittleSpoon
    Project Holder

    Actually, now that I see the plume I think its a bit too masculine. Don't you think? Let's keep the head like it was in draft#9 but make the tongue just a little bit smaller than what we have in draft#11. Thank you.

  • January 9, 2011 3:41 AM vector

    they are transparent. :)

  • January 9, 2011 2:41 AM LittleSpoon
    Project Holder

    Great work Vector! So Draft#9 is the best one so far. Almost exactly what we want. Keep everything about Draft#9 the same except for two things. Can we bring the tongue down so that it doesn't pass the beak? Also I would like to see a small single "plume" on the back of the phoenix's head. Short strong and sharp. Kind of like the one in Draft#5 curving diagonally up and left but just a little shorter in length.

    Just one question about Draft#9, the white sections in the phoenix's body, are they transparent or white? we would love it if they were just transparent.

    Thanks! It's looking really great!

  • January 7, 2011 7:40 PM LittleSpoon
    Project Holder

    Thanks for all the great drafts vector. Very timely too.

    We love all the work but of course we are looking for what will work for our situation and product.

    With that said,

    Draft#4 is really nice but may be too horizontally spread out for the small cylinder battery shape of the product. Also the head has more of a condor look with the bulged beak and I get a crowded sensation from the highest orange strokes in front of the face. Feel free to try and tweak that one. We are open to new ideas there.

    Draft#3 is the favorite between my partner and I. It has everything we were initially looking for. However we would like to see the wings feathers toned down in number. Particularly the lower flanges. If maybe the feather ends could start with a yellow or orange and move to the top of the wings into a red color that would look nice. The main things to note on Draft 3 is that the head and neck are reminiscent of a swan. If the neck were not pulled back and the head/chin were raised up and to the right that would be better. Finally the body near the bottom has a slight cartoonish feel like a rubber duck. Can the body be shaped more like a bust of the birds breast and end in a curved point that goes down and to the left?

    Great job on the submissions. We are eagerly awaiting to see what else can be done with Draft#3 and #4.

  • January 7, 2011 2:03 PM vector

    Thnx :)

  • January 7, 2011 1:46 PM bonita

    Draft#1 very nice .



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