January 29, 2012 7:00 PM drcrowley99 Project Holder
I'd like to wrap up this project before the expiration ... please put forth your best efforts sooner rather than later.
January 29, 2012 6:58 PM drcrowley99 Project Holder
CM8647 - I love your use of the salon pics on the back!! The front: the main message "We Have Moved!" doesn't jump out to the reader.
January 24, 2012 2:37 PM drcrowley99 Project Holder
Thanks, Few things. Postcard: I like the impact of the new "we have moved", but types style might clash a bit? Envelope: Add the hawthorne location and phone numbers on olutside, but you can make them smaller ... and Make "look and feel your best" in italics. Giftcard: must have two phone numbers underneath the addresses (they are two separate locations). Last, we recently rebranded ... so add "formerly Hollywood Tans" in italics below the main logo of the postcard.
January 21, 2012 10:49 AM drcrowley99 Project Holder
Thanks for the fine efforts. For the back of postcard, I like draft #1 with the offer featured on top. I was thinking that the front could have a smaller element "TAN FREE (see offer on back") that doesn’t take away from the clean look of the front. I’d also like to promote and in store promotional, FREE LEG TAN THURDSAY (every Thursday till March 15). I added a pic of the leg tanner to include if you think it won’t be too busy. I also added another pic of the tanning booths that might be used (only at your discretion)
The Gift card should be one sided, needs to include address/phones of both salons and add a line for Date. Try using a more luxurious font to represent the quality of the business. The envelope is not for mailing, simply for presentation … so perhaps use the graphics that you used for the “other side” of the gift card with the tag line “Look and Feel Your Best”.
Thanks! When you get a chance can you check your messages in the top right-hand corner of the page
January 19, 2012 7:40 PM drcrowley99 Project Holder
Thanks for your submission. I like it. I'd like to reference to the Free week offer somewhere on the front. Also, see if there is a way to make the "We Have Moved" even more prominent. I think it's fairly prominent in your first draft, but want to see a few different levels of POP.
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The Gift card should be one sided, needs to include address/phones of both salons and add a line for Date. Try using a more luxurious font to represent the quality of the business. The envelope is not for mailing, simply for presentation … so perhaps use the graphics that you used for the “other side” of the gift card with the tag line “Look and Feel Your Best”.
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