Bilum Bags - Business Card - Online Retail

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• March 07, 2014 4:50 AM
   Heath
    Project Holder
  The use of the company logo on the front at this stage has not sat in harmony with the other 'standard' business card elements. In this way, the logo looks out of alignment, and sits 'uncomfortably' on the front of the business card in the designs submitted to date. Harmony, placement and alignment in terms of colours and graphic elements are not fitting together to create the polished elegant outcome the focus group is asking for on the front of the business card.
  
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• March 07, 2014 4:48 AM
   Heath
    Project Holder
  The back of the card.... The most striking designs have used a complete black back with different elements in white or a faded version thereof. The use of the bag on the back has not yet developed the results we are looking for. However, the logo and the company name has been well received in white. The use of the bird of paradise in white on black has also been striking and well received.
  
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• March 07, 2014 4:46 AM
   Heath
    Project Holder
  The treatment of the bag and carrying these colours through the design on the front of the card is essential. At this stage, the treatment of the 'coloured' bag element hasn't brought forward the elegant sophisticated look and feel the focus group is after. Simple, elegancy is the outcome for the front of the business card.
  
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• March 07, 2014 4:44 AM
   Heath
    Project Holder
  Dear Designers, Please only present square edged cards, not round edged cards.
  
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