Draft #5....I would like to see WITHOUT the pic of model....Product is the focus in the ad......I would like to see how it looks with only the products and book....and corrections I mentioned earlier......
Draft #10...Interesting w/out the model and focus on the products....3 Easy Steps..Products are covered by the arrow.....I would like to logo smaller, product larger, I would like to see Order Today and website info larger, more visible...
I like the watch the Intstructional dvds in the comfort of your own home....Thanks for paying attention to detail.....
At this time Draft #5 is the Closest...GREAT!!
All the important information in included and I like the various colors. BUT, on the logo on the left ad, the face is brown, hands are white.....
Don't like the video streamline around the pic, would like the pic (before/after) to look natural....now, it looks copied from a video....Under the products, please center (For ALL Hair Types)
The book can be larger and the pic of the model can be smaller....her pic needs to fit into the screen....Thanks for paying attention to the details!!!! The ads are clear and easy to follow and looks interesting, with all the important information!!!
Toni Love's Cleansing System should be the focus for the ad. (Products are NOT in ads)
The book is secondary and can be added as: Toni is also the author of "The World of Wigs, Weaves, and Extensions".....book can be smaller.....Logo can be MUCH smaller....logo shouldn't take up a third of page.....
I LIKE the pic (before and after) used w/the book. Before/After pic, REMOVE the area @ the bottom of pic showing "volume" streamline.
I LOVE the format of #3 and #4....seeing them beside each other helps alot........I would like to see different colors used to promote the hair products.....
Toni Love's Hair Cleansing System (for ALL hair types)
3 Easy Steps:
STEP 1 Residue Remover - A Pre-Shampoo Solution
STEP 2 Hair and Scalp Cleanser
STEP 3 Hair and Scalp Conditioner
(The above can be placed underneath/beside each bottle)
No More Residue Build-Up!
No More Itchy Scalp!
No More Sour Smells!
Keep YOUR hair healthy and hydrated while wearing WIGS, WEAVES, and EXTENSIONS!
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The ad on the right in Draft #5 is great!
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I like the watch the Intstructional dvds in the comfort of your own home....Thanks for paying attention to detail.....
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All the important information in included and I like the various colors. BUT, on the logo on the left ad, the face is brown, hands are white.....
Don't like the video streamline around the pic, would like the pic (before/after) to look natural....now, it looks copied from a video....Under the products, please center (For ALL Hair Types)
The book can be larger and the pic of the model can be smaller....her pic needs to fit into the screen....Thanks for paying attention to the details!!!! The ads are clear and easy to follow and looks interesting, with all the important information!!!
I can't wait to see the minor changes!!:-)
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I would like each dvd visible and emphasize: Pay ONLY $30
Wigs, Weaves, and Extensions DO NOT have to be all capital letters
Thx!
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The book is secondary and can be added as: Toni is also the author of "The World of Wigs, Weaves, and Extensions".....book can be smaller.....Logo can be MUCH smaller....logo shouldn't take up a third of page.....
I LIKE the pic (before and after) used w/the book. Before/After pic, REMOVE the area @ the bottom of pic showing "volume" streamline.
I LOVE the format of #3 and #4....seeing them beside each other helps alot........I would like to see different colors used to promote the hair products.....
Toni Love's Hair Cleansing System (for ALL hair types)
3 Easy Steps:
STEP 1 Residue Remover - A Pre-Shampoo Solution
STEP 2 Hair and Scalp Cleanser
STEP 3 Hair and Scalp Conditioner
(The above can be placed underneath/beside each bottle)
No More Residue Build-Up!
No More Itchy Scalp!
No More Sour Smells!
Keep YOUR hair healthy and hydrated while wearing WIGS, WEAVES, and EXTENSIONS!
This is NOT in any particular order......Thx!
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